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Your Eternal Whore
I need you in a way I can't explain
you come to me wave after wave
with your soul and sex you enter
I'm deviant for you alone
spreading my pussy wide
for you to cum in
come to me Master
train me to take your load
teach me the tricks you know
your own personal whore
phening for your seed
fill all my aching holes
hungry, starved just for you
pop my cherry with your angry fist
taught obedience by a man of the highest caliber
you alone tame the beast in me
with your fierce finesse
caress my inner pussy walls
with you hardened member
I crawl to you Master
across the glass of my pride
you've broken me in
pimped me out
got me turning tricks just for you
your eternal toy
Published 21st Oct 2016
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21st Oct 2016 12:44pm
You're such a wonderfully depraved sick cunt, but I get it
I can call you a cunt and you know that's a compliment
Look at the power, the sneer and grimace on that dudes face
There's so much here Brenda
Your opus
Like
Xo
I can call you a cunt and you know that's a compliment
Look at the power, the sneer and grimace on that dudes face
There's so much here Brenda
Your opus
Like
Xo
21st Oct 2016 4:59pm
aw Poet I absolutely love the way you talk dirty to me thank you ;) love you..
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 1:52pm
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21st Oct 2016 4:59pm
21st Oct 2016 2:30pm
It took me five fucking minutes to tear my
eyes from the photograph in order to read
your poem. And what a poem it is. You tear
down ALL the barriers and just "get it on!"
eyes from the photograph in order to read
your poem. And what a poem it is. You tear
down ALL the barriers and just "get it on!"
21st Oct 2016 5:00pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 4:33pm
Powerful erotic write. 💓
No one can deliver as you can, lovely Crim.
Fierce ink.
No one can deliver as you can, lovely Crim.
Fierce ink.
21st Oct 2016 5:01pm
21st Oct 2016 5:07pm
What I love about you the most is how you fluctuate between the soft and hard side of sex (and somewhere in between). You can be as tender as a feather in one write and hard as a whip in the next. These experiences make you unpredictable in both nature and writes, which makes you a fascinating poet and person. I never know what to expect with your reads, and I really like that.
22nd Oct 2016 9:02pm
thank you Sage one for such fantastic comment.. really I never know where my muse will lead either.. i'm so happy all sides of me are embraced..
love Brenda
love Brenda
21st Oct 2016 5:56pm
So much devotion in this piece!
It's hard to explain such an intense relationship, but you made a beautiful poem out of it!
Love the picture, but you already could have guessed that ;-)
Love, Duende
It's hard to explain such an intense relationship, but you made a beautiful poem out of it!
Love the picture, but you already could have guessed that ;-)
Love, Duende
22nd Oct 2016 9:02pm
21st Oct 2016 6:23pm
You had me at whore... Hehe ^^
This poem was all kinds of good. Very well written Crim :-)
This poem was all kinds of good. Very well written Crim :-)
22nd Oct 2016 9:03pm
21st Oct 2016 7:05pm
No one writes erotica like you,Crim. You make it more,give it a touching afterthought that might normally go unnoticed....
22nd Oct 2016 9:04pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 8:15pm
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22nd Oct 2016 9:04pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 11:22pm
Brenda.. loved this, and the pic.. well lets just say it fit the words.. no one can write like you.. you're a brilliant, and beautiful poetic goddess.. so honored to read you, and call you friend.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
22nd Oct 2016 9:05pm
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 9:11pm
Whoohoo Crim......this is absolutely sexy sexy sexy.......wish I wasn't on my way to the other job.......but then again........I will be back to this for my night cap of sexy writes......luvin this sexy Lady.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Oct 2016 9:12pm
23rd Oct 2016 4:28am
I found this one difficult - seeing you in this role sometimes makes me sad. I suppose I just don't get it :-(
having said that it is so well written :-)
having said that it is so well written :-)
23rd Oct 2016 5:53am
thank you David for your thoughts though don't feel to bad for me some of this just fantasy ;)
love Brenda
love Brenda
23rd Oct 2016 8:41am
the macabre beauty of absolute subservience.
you exalt the xxxtremes of primal discipline...
you exalt the xxxtremes of primal discipline...
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