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of sudden desire
we fucked. because my passion is overwhelming
because her devotion is absolute.
we fucked. it is the primal urge, the first rapture.
if there was a Garden in Mesopotamia,
a man was created, & he was given a woman;
when they fucked, only then did it become Paradise.
before there was love, there was sexual union.
it joins us to the animals.
we fucked. the word itself is coarse & cruel.
it’s denied to the sensitivities of poetry & art;
if it’s used there, it’s labeled extreme, & banned.
we are ascended when we have it
and tormented when we do not.
we fucked. we are in a lonely place,
she & I, where no one can find us.
we touched; we kissed. we held each other with
extraordinary surrender –
and fucking emerged out of all that is beautiful.
we fucked. of all the glory in heaven
so much was never given.
you are Tereska & I am John. we fucked…
(Art: Jean Agelou)
Published 20th Oct 2016
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20th Oct 2016 2:28am
John,John,John....
Lonely places where no one can find us,so beautiful and so passionate.
This photo belongs to the poetry and I have no more words.....
Lonely places where no one can find us,so beautiful and so passionate.
This photo belongs to the poetry and I have no more words.....
20th Oct 2016 2:50am
You describe the beauty of just being human in ways no one else does and with an unsanctimonious reverence that I never knew was possible
You make me see the image of God in the everyday thoughts and actions that compose the life of an everyday man
I definitely like this one, Sir John
You make me see the image of God in the everyday thoughts and actions that compose the life of an everyday man
I definitely like this one, Sir John
20th Oct 2016 3:02am
John I love the primal desire and need of this write it thrusts it's into me and brings me to my knees cumming in my panties..
love Crim
love Crim
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20th Oct 2016 5:45am
The beauty in bodies bare... :) Perfect in your blue ink, as always, sir.
Tpd
Tpd
20th Oct 2016 10:54am
Wow, you have just changed my perspective on the word fuck. I always thought of fucking as something enjoyable but somehow cheap but now I'm thinking that it's connection to each other on a different (but just as valuable) level, and as a connection to the primal and natural animal within us all. Very nicely expressed and thank you.
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 11:14am
This is so mouth watering, at least you are
attentive to her.
attentive to her.
20th Oct 2016 9:44pm
21st Oct 2016 1:34am
"we fucked. of all the glory in heaven
so much was never given" Damn loved this..excellent asalways John!!
so much was never given" Damn loved this..excellent asalways John!!
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