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Confession
Bless me for I have sinned
pray me a forgiveness
sprinkle me with water of atonement
for all my sins and iniquities
wantonly had I seduced
the representatives of holiness
they who walked in godly gait
looking at my womanly allure
they who expounded on Godliness
fell to my feet begging for more
to partake of my exquisite gifts
to bury themselves in my womanhood
on the pulpit where they pontificate
on evils and how the man
should submit into the spirit of holiness
but within they burn with desire
as they looked at my cleavage
knowing how the softness
waited to be devoured
their loins ache
I confess to being the tool of temptation
I confess and beg for the forgiveness of sin
Pray for my soul so I wouldn't burn in hell
forgive me...I thirst still
Who gave unto women
her beauty and gifts....
Published 18th Oct 2016
| Edited 5th Jun 2018
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18th Oct 2016 1:43am
This is interesting Grace, but methinks thou takes too much blame foe doin' what comes naturally. What comp was this written for?
JJ
JJ
18th Oct 2016 2:10am
:) poetryman- it was for the competition 'Confession'. It was all based on imagination, no worries, no one would glance at my cleavage to save their life.:):) I did mould it on someone in our parish though.
18th Oct 2016 2:21am
Lol, don't shortchange your cleavage, there are men who, well, maybe I shouldn't say what some men prefer, but trust me, not every man is a breast man...
You may however, need to confess for writing about a fellow parishioner in a poem... 3 Hail Mary's and $10 extra in the donations basket during Sunday mass... lol
You may however, need to confess for writing about a fellow parishioner in a poem... 3 Hail Mary's and $10 extra in the donations basket during Sunday mass... lol
18th Oct 2016 6:06am
:) Poetryman...you are right about the confession...I may think about it next Sunday. If I see her again the Act of Contrition may be repeated.:)
18th Oct 2016 7:28am
Deep piece of writing, love the tone of it.
"Forgive me... I thirst still" <---- Fine ending here.
Great piece Grace, thank you for sharing it!:)
~anonshadow😏
"Forgive me... I thirst still" <---- Fine ending here.
Great piece Grace, thank you for sharing it!:)
~anonshadow😏
18th Oct 2016 8:06am
18th Oct 2016 7:34pm
The representatives of holiness may be hypocrites if they pound the pulpit Sunday morning after seducing Saturday night. Or they might be led into temptation by you, Grace. Not your fault if they can't keep their eyes off your exquisite gifts. Can't blame them!
20th Oct 2016 1:53pm
Dear Crowfly:) it wasn't me! haha! anyway, I wrote it for the competition Confession, but after a parish member, very sexy...even the priests eye her...:)
18th Oct 2016 11:48pm
This goes a long way to remind us once again that clergy men are humans too;vulnerable in every way like any other man. Permit me to add,amongst all forms of temptations that exist,the one arising from the opposite sex are the most difficult to overcome. I can relate to both the Tempter and the Tempted...very interesting read. Good luck with the comp!
20th Oct 2016 1:55pm
:) dustyjjewels...oyes! some people say when you are trying to be chaste and pious, temptations grow stronger. Must be hard for priests and monks.
Anonymous
19th Oct 2016 4:47am
Grace you have always intrigued me. With this poem more than ever. I appreciate this write very much and thank you for creating and sharing it. Competition or not it is relevant!
20th Oct 2016 1:56pm
Slowgasm:) thank you for reading. yes, temptations are everywhere in any form. Those trying to walk the straight and narrow road suffer most.
20th Oct 2016 4:57am
Very intriguing writing, Grace, calling the holier than thou on their hypocrisy. Strong stuff written very well !
20th Oct 2016 2:01pm
Hi Tony, I have seen my share of hypocrisy in the church. I once heard a priest admonished a couple of gays who went to attend a funeral. It became a rant. So embarrassing. Priest must have been a closet gay and ashamed of himself.
