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void
Alcohol, chocolate, coffee and weed
only thing pure in this night is my greed
Drinking alone, blinking, my phone
tone is low
you can see
Tell the passing of time in the flick of an eye
different guy, subliminal smile
credits roll by
My phone, my own and tv
only thing pure in this night is my greed
Drinking alone, blinking, my phone
tone is low
you can see
Tell the passing of time in the flick of an eye
different guy, subliminal smile
credits roll by
My phone, my own and tv
Published 15th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2016 11:29pm
Fuck, in a few lines you lay out a dark situation brother. I see someone wrapped in a dark room indulging, getting wasted having a moment. Dragged back to reality and into a conversation. Putting on an instant facade until the room can become dark, warm and silent again.
May have got that shit wrong but interperatation rules.
love the words "different guy, subliminal smile"
uber wordsmithery dude
May have got that shit wrong but interperatation rules.
love the words "different guy, subliminal smile"
uber wordsmithery dude
Glad you like it and thanks. Your interpretation is spot on in places and by no means wrong. I was alone though, dark room over indulging feeling a bit disgusted I was spending my time munching cadburys zoned on my phone just looking now and then at the telly.
Appreciate it
Appreciate it
