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when you're busy living life who needs fairy tales
Love is thick in the air
the kind you only read about
in books of the romantic nature
This is different
it's a seeing of mind
the meeting of soul
No oceans
can stop an all consuming heat
from coming to fruition
These two hearts torn asunder
then thrown to the winds at birth
An ancient love
long before they took their first breaths
they knew one another other
a story written in the constellations
Primal lust
a hidden drive
he must be at her breast
she craves his untamed wildness
Raw energy purely electric
came together as one
set us all on fire
with their unadulterated blaze
Books be damned
who needs them
when you're busy living life
Witness dreams come true
this is where we truly burn
Published 10th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 2:19pm
Yes....indeed!
The depths of that fire awaken us, move us, ....and when it meets that equal fire, it is total consumption.
I love this write, and the truth of passion that drips of your page. 💓
The depths of that fire awaken us, move us, ....and when it meets that equal fire, it is total consumption.
I love this write, and the truth of passion that drips of your page. 💓
10th Oct 2016 5:49pm
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 2:19pm
My Beautiful Brenda....LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! Clapping hands like a little girl and squeaking all over with smiles galore lovely one!!
I love you so much!!
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you so much!!
xoxoxox Taryn
10th Oct 2016 5:49pm
aw thank you beautiful one I love you so much and am so happy for you :)
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
10th Oct 2016 6:27pm
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 6:44pm
Title says it all, and so have the comments ... so I will refrain, keep mum to my words and just say an ``excellent`` trinket of ink ... love you, Lady ... ~Devlin.
10th Oct 2016 7:05pm
10th Oct 2016 7:10pm
The title itself is a poem Brenda! couldn't agree more...
a story, a beautiful example of quantum entanglement! excellent as ..
a story, a beautiful example of quantum entanglement! excellent as ..
10th Oct 2016 7:44pm
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 8:38pm
Spot on my lovely ... Reality in love, lived in life.
✨Always peace Trish
✨Always peace Trish
11th Oct 2016 6:50am
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 9:36pm
There is absolute beauty and bliss in this, despite being torn asunder...love will find its way. Gorgeous! :)
Willow
Willow
11th Oct 2016 6:51am
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11th Oct 2016 1:50am
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12th Oct 2016 1:20am
I tend to bury my head in a book in times of trouble, an ostrich, not a crow. You create your own story and refuse to live life vicariously. That takes courage and talent when you put pen to page. Fine work Crim!
13th Oct 2016 00:50am
thank you Sir Crow I love happy ending especially when they're true stories..
love Crim
love Crim
12th Oct 2016 3:57am
Crim, this was stunning, hun!
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Primal lust
a hidden drive
he must be at her breast
she craves his untamed wildness " <--- I adore this! xo
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"
Primal lust
a hidden drive
he must be at her breast
she craves his untamed wildness " <--- I adore this! xo
13th Oct 2016 00:51am
13th Oct 2016 8:03pm
that last line is killer...absolutely wonderful, as well as the idea of 'an ancient love'....a sweeping, romantic notion...fantastically upbeat piece of work [:
beautiful job crim [:
beautiful job crim [:
13th Oct 2016 11:58pm
thank you Jesta so honored to have you gracing my pages sigh an ancient love I'm a believer ;)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
15th Oct 2016 3:51am
Brenda.. this is poetic bliss.. your words are divine, and full of insight.. you're truly just kicking ass.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
15th Oct 2016 6:06pm
