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Finding Mr M's Chocolate Dream
“Babe, I love you so
I want you to know
That I'm going to miss your love
The minute you walk out that door
So please don't go......"
Her soft, round breast
hang above my head
she covers me with her warmth
and my eyes can not see....
….but my hands can feel
her tender, candy kisses
filled with creme
swollen nipples
that bless my lips
pursed and wet
I melt
as her creamy goodness
drips into my mouth....I scream
( girl hit your hallelujah... )
“ I wanna be with you
turn the lights down low, pull my shirt up slow
open the buttons one by one and watch it come undone ….”
Can I be your aphrodisiac?
Bursting your cherry cordial
wide open....from the back
Let me stir your butter crème
with my whisk
beating
your
meat
into sweet submission
just
like
this......
a frothy wellspring spills
from deep within your gape
a delicious “slow screw against the wall”
no surrender, no escape
“You know very well
what you are
my sugar thang
you're my chocolate star....”
….Baby,
won't you please
just stay ?
Published 7th Oct 2016
| Edited 8th Oct 2016
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8th Oct 2016 4:34am
MrM:) You sure know how to turn on a girl. Now who can resist that.:) I am sure she stayed...a long time. Good read, as always.
8th Oct 2016 12:47pm
8th Oct 2016 12:57pm
I love this....very sweet and sensual. And I must agree with Grace...you definitely know how to turn a woman on. Lovely write sweetheart. 💋
8th Oct 2016 5:03pm
lawd... with all that chocolate, we readers are gonna' need insulin. HA! :)
8th Oct 2016 6:31pm
Such a sensual write, now I want chocolate!!!
I really like what you did with these lines:
beating
your
meat
into sweet submission
just
like
this......
I really like what you did with these lines:
beating
your
meat
into sweet submission
just
like
this......
9th Oct 2016 3:08am
Just
Like
This
....youve written a beautifully worded poem here, sensual, seductive and tasteful , I can feel the longing for the person it's for I adore it :)
Like
This
....youve written a beautifully worded poem here, sensual, seductive and tasteful , I can feel the longing for the person it's for I adore it :)
9th Oct 2016 4:36am
All I can say is keep on examining that "glow of love". You enrich my world with all you create here.
9th Oct 2016 8:09pm
