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No place to call home
I sit…
Alone…
The cool caress of a gentle zephyr,
Sends a tingle throughout my body
That chills my soul…
The lyrics of such a saturnine song,
Seem to speak softly to my spirit
They remind me, that I’m not alone...
But…
I am...
I don’t feel overly important to anyone,
To this place
To this life...
Alone…
The cool caress of a gentle zephyr,
Sends a tingle throughout my body
That chills my soul…
The lyrics of such a saturnine song,
Seem to speak softly to my spirit
They remind me, that I’m not alone...
But…
I am...
I don’t feel overly important to anyone,
To this place
To this life...
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Re. No place to call home
7th Oct 2016 7:27pm
The tricky thing about being alone in our thoughts is not being able to realize how important we are to others. We only know our own perceptions. It's a good expression of a unanchored feeling. :)
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Re: Re. No place to call home
7th Oct 2016 7:31pm
True. I need it, for my creativity, but i get it a lot when i don't want it. I think i make the best of it though.
Re: Re. No place to call home
7th Oct 2016 7:32pm
Re. No place to call home
Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 9:30pm
Poetry is a lonely subject so it`s only natural that Poet`s are just as lonely ... It almost compares to having an affair but with words that only words can understand [well, IMO] ... ~xo, Devlin
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Re: Re. No place to call home
7th Oct 2016 10:31pm
Re. No place to call home
8th Oct 2016 10:30am
Sometimes, it's in those moments that you hear what flows below the surface... within your heart.
May you appreciate the stillness associated with such inner peace, when you're alone. Not many are fortunate to savour those moments as life evolves.
Peace... be unto you bro ! 🌻🎈😎🌞
May you appreciate the stillness associated with such inner peace, when you're alone. Not many are fortunate to savour those moments as life evolves.
Peace... be unto you bro ! 🌻🎈😎🌞
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Re: Re. No place to call home
8th Oct 2016 9:46pm
Re. No place to call home
9th Oct 2016 5:01am
A lovely drift through loneliness. Sometimes that's just where we are,but the sharing of poetry gives it worth and touches those who read it....
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Re: Re. No place to call home
9th Oct 2016 3:28pm
Re. No place to call home
10th Oct 2016 7:09pm
it's a sorrowful place to be in. I can relate so easily. I love the simplicity yet packed with such rawness. respectfully, your friend,
me
me
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10th Oct 2016 9:38pm
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Re. No place to call home
26th Nov 2016 1:05pm
To learn how to be alone with yourself and truly like your own company is a difficult lesson, but one that gives many insights! I really love this piece (though it's painful to read) and it made me smile to see the word 'saturnine'
I only know that word from the song Saturnine by The Gathering (Dutch band)
Great write, Chivo!
I only know that word from the song Saturnine by The Gathering (Dutch band)
Great write, Chivo!
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Re: Re. No place to call home
26th Nov 2016 4:36pm
I wholeheartedly agree, difficult, but well-rewarded. I do notice that drastic differences in the minds of people who never spend any time alone. A song called Saturnine!! I'll surely be having a listen ASAP!!
Re. No place to call home
1st Dec 2016 9:05pm
I can totally relate to this one except its different music that speaks to my soul...usually Birdy with her haunting fragile voice :)
You are certainly not alone my friend and everybody is important to someone...You're important to me at the very least as I'm a bit of a fan! Have a huge admiration for you and your work! *highfive
You are certainly not alone my friend and everybody is important to someone...You're important to me at the very least as I'm a bit of a fan! Have a huge admiration for you and your work! *highfive
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Re: Re. No place to call home
1st Dec 2016 10:10pm
You're awesome! Thanks FC! I'm super stoked that you're enjoying my work! Certainly a bright spot in my day! Who's birdy?
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2nd Dec 2016 8:24am
Birdy is an English singer songwriter, perhaps most famous for her cover of Bon Iver's skinny love. Her voice is that of an angel and her songs simply beautiful! Think she's been writing music since she was like 12 or something 💜
I'm thrilled to be your bright spot :)
I'm thrilled to be your bright spot :)
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Re. No place to call home
11th Feb 2017 1:47pm
As sad as it is, we are truly alone here in the world. But you are an amazing writer, my dear :*
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11th Feb 2017 2:59pm