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Claim
Upon your flesh
I stake my claim...
Burning desires...
etching my name.
Your every thought
is known to me..
Your every word
I do clearly see..
You have poured your
soul into my glass...
Intoxication soon..
follows..fast.
Delirious from your
words of passion..
Drunk on your love's
uncanny fashion...
Desires fanned with
words that flow..
Burning with hunger..
words that glow.
You stroke and fondle
my sensitive brain ..
With sensual words
you suck and drain..
Making me cum deep
within my core...
You're my staked claim
and so much more.
I stake my claim...
Burning desires...
etching my name.
Your every thought
is known to me..
Your every word
I do clearly see..
You have poured your
soul into my glass...
Intoxication soon..
follows..fast.
Delirious from your
words of passion..
Drunk on your love's
uncanny fashion...
Desires fanned with
words that flow..
Burning with hunger..
words that glow.
You stroke and fondle
my sensitive brain ..
With sensual words
you suck and drain..
Making me cum deep
within my core...
You're my staked claim
and so much more.
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Re. Claim
7th Oct 2016 6:55pm
Re. Claim
7th Oct 2016 7:10pm
Thank you so much
my Beautiful friend.
You are always too
kind.
Btw. I miss your wings..
Love
Keith
my Beautiful friend.
You are always too
kind.
Btw. I miss your wings..
Love
Keith
Re: Re. Claim
7th Oct 2016 9:08pm
Thank you so much for your read and comment. It is always much
appreciated.
Keith
appreciated.
Keith
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 7:56pm
So very beautiful.
Words of overflowing passion.
Lovely ink, my friend 💓
Words of overflowing passion.
Lovely ink, my friend 💓
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I thank you as always my
sweet friend. Your words
are always appreciated and
looked forward to.
Loves
Keith
sweet friend. Your words
are always appreciated and
looked forward to.
Loves
Keith
Re. Claim
7th Oct 2016 8:29pm
Re: Re. Claim
8th Oct 2016 2:05am
Thank you so much
for your read and comment
Damon. Your words are
much appreciated
Keith
for your read and comment
Damon. Your words are
much appreciated
Keith
Re. Claim
7th Oct 2016 8:29pm
Nice write here. Once they touch your mind you are completely theirs. How very true. Great ink!
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Re: Re. Claim
8th Oct 2016 10:19am
Thank you much for the comment. We always speak of our hearts but it is always our mind. Once it is occupied by another....game over.
Thank you so much for stopping by.
Keith
Thank you so much for stopping by.
Keith
Re. Claim
7th Oct 2016 8:48pm
I own a name etched deep into my entire being. This was seriously sensual. Love this. <3
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Re: Re. Claim
8th Oct 2016 11:13am
Oh so you understand exactly what I am saying my dear lady. To know that you truly belong to another.
Thank you for stopping by my dear.
Loves
Keith
Thank you for stopping by my dear.
Loves
Keith
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 9:49pm
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8th Oct 2016 11:15am
Thank you for the read and comment sir. I appreciate you taking the time to stop and leave your kind words.
Keith
Keith
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Anonymous
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8th Oct 2016 1:45am
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Re. Claim
8th Oct 2016 6:25pm
Wow, this piece is drenched with passion!
Your countdown is tangible in both of your writes, I almost feel like a witness ;-)
Thoroughly enjoyed this one!
Your countdown is tangible in both of your writes, I almost feel like a witness ;-)
Thoroughly enjoyed this one!
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Re: Re. Claim
8th Oct 2016 9:21pm
The time is fast approaching and it is a passion that is reflected in the writes. I thank you and appreciate you for the reads and the comments.
Love
Keith
Love
Keith
Re. Claim
8th Oct 2016 7:48pm
This has flow to it, and the rhyme scheme works well. The theme is well developed with a touch of eroticism. Maybe the deeper the cum the better the write. Fine work!
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Re. Claim
8th Oct 2016 9:54pm
Thank you sir crow for your thoughtful comment. I always
look forward to your words.
Keith
look forward to your words.
Keith
Re. Claim
9th Oct 2016 4:57am
Passionate,seductive, and loving; the perfect combination of emotion felt behind the words....
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