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Alien Greetings
we are descendants of a higher intelligence
gifted with telepathic abilities
talk to each other mind to mind
silent greetings
Touch one another
with hands unseen
caress each other
A society with a strict hierarchy
we are matriarchal in nature
a Queen rules our comings and goings
sent pings
affect all things great and small
we are among the Earthborn beings
changing their genetic code
Introducing technology slowly
we are in the space race now
soon you will have the ability to travel wormholes
finally, see your creator face to face
What a time we live in
so exciting and frightening
I'm a sleeper cell
awake for the moment
to send this message of greeting
Transmitting a high-frequency ping
bouncing against your mind
I wait to hear back
Soon I will go back to sleep
until the time for the great awakening
I communicate with fellow Rephaim
silently, peacefully, travel the ethernet
Wake child to a new day
let your third eye ease open
echoing a hello across the universe
PING
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 6th Oct 2016
| Edited 25th Mar 2019
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Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 00:35am
A cool look at something different. I like it very much.
Check the line "a Queen rules are comings and goings". It reads like it should be " our comings and goings". Cool piece.
Check the line "a Queen rules are comings and goings". It reads like it should be " our comings and goings". Cool piece.
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7th Oct 2016 00:37am
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 00:43am
I love the visuals that you brought to us in this write. Very different and truly appealing.
Your creative mind is reflected beautifully. 💓
Your creative mind is reflected beautifully. 💓
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7th Oct 2016 3:08am
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7th Oct 2016 4:00am
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7th Oct 2016 4:06am
lol Hades the word Rephaim has been whispered in my ears for years now and I was told secrets of their true origin not until today did I find out they were giants of old some believe to be born of the Fallen Angel others believe of alien descent.. thank you for showing this write love..
yours Crim
yours Crim
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 6:16am
Yes, this is reflected in the movie Noah ... but each giant was an Angel ... Oh, my ally in Darkness, you must really be digging into your inner poetics ... a divine write; very unexpected, I have to admit ... love you, Woman ... ~Devlin.
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thank you my Queen it's an interesting topic with so many theories like Noah's ship was actually a space ship holding all of the different DNA strands instead of holding each species..
I love you..
xo Brenda
I love you..
xo Brenda
Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 4:09am
lol,how unique and imaginative, brilliant crim, however u may b disappointed to, meet our leaders after the election, lol...
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7th Oct 2016 4:13am
thank you Dean I think our political leaders are an experiment gone wrong lol.. deeply appreciate you showing love on this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 5:34am
I am blown away, Brenda. This is absolutely awe inspiring. Take a bow malady Crimm.
✨Always peace Trish
✨Always peace Trish
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7th Oct 2016 7:29am
Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 5:39am
What a truly creative mind you have,Crim. Impressive poetry taken to a whole new level.
Such an interesting read....
Such an interesting read....
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7th Oct 2016 7:30am
Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 7:32am
I love this from you. I always had a thing for aliens and outer space. This was done beautifully.
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7th Oct 2016 7:35am
thank you DC you've touched my heart tonight I cherish your thoughts :)
love Crim
love Crim
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7th Oct 2016 10:08am
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Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 11:26am
Wow Crim, didn't realize you too were a part of 'our' awakening... lol this was remarkably rendered in creativity n imagination... :)
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7th Oct 2016 3:18pm
Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 12:28pm
we touch with hands unseen,
it's the only way & it hurts
but would we give it up? we cannot.
tremendous poem, Crim,
it took me where I was afraid to go...
it's the only way & it hurts
but would we give it up? we cannot.
tremendous poem, Crim,
it took me where I was afraid to go...
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Re: Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 3:20pm
thank you John true we touch with hands unseen and at times it does hurt beautifully put and we press on through the pain for the ahhh of it..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 5:04pm
It's actually quite brilliant, Brenda. But, I have always
felt madness to be the deepest of brilliance gone
'crazy' amid the 'sanity' of a self- defined world.
A lot of truth in this one, whether realized consciously
or sub.
felt madness to be the deepest of brilliance gone
'crazy' amid the 'sanity' of a self- defined world.
A lot of truth in this one, whether realized consciously
or sub.
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Re: Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 6:25pm
thank you deeply Sage one for embracing me and this write i'm honored :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Alien Greetings
7th Oct 2016 6:21pm
Dear Crim, what a surprise!
Different, but exceptional and brilliant!!!
Love love love that last stanza!
Love, Duende
Different, but exceptional and brilliant!!!
Love love love that last stanza!
Love, Duende
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7th Oct 2016 6:26pm
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2016 00:30am
Damn, Brenda.. this belongs in my list.. but i have no room.. i truly loved this, it was so brilliant.. when it comes to aliens, and possible conspiracy theories, i'm your man.. loved this lovely one.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
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8th Oct 2016 6:07pm
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8th Oct 2016 00:53am
Dearest Brenda,
You are a woman full of surprises. Something so very different from you. Very imaginative and visually stimulating. Wonderful story,
wonderful write.
Love
Keith
You are a woman full of surprises. Something so very different from you. Very imaginative and visually stimulating. Wonderful story,
wonderful write.
Love
Keith
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8th Oct 2016 6:08pm
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2016 1:48am
Precious Crim......luvin this piece of your imagination......I sometimes wonder about the souls from beyond........how intelligent they are......I wonder if we will ever know them......thought provoking write.......enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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8th Oct 2016 6:08pm
thank you lovely Flower I believe we will know someday beautiful lady :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2016 1:56am
My Beautiful Brenda, as others before me have said, something very different but still so very profound a write coming from you. I would like to say and believe that we have touched hands more than once and I am so grateful for that...I don't want to wake up if it means it can't happen again...so I shall thank whoever I have to for that.
I love you
xoxoxo Taryn
I love you
xoxoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Alien Greetings
8th Oct 2016 6:09pm
thank you beautiful one indeed we have caressed with hands unseen I love you so much..
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
Re. Alien Greetings
8th Oct 2016 6:02pm
....first off, the artwork is divine and it compliment this write brilliantly.
I love when poets imagination goes mad. It gives us an edge. ;) Wonderfully done Crim..xo
I love when poets imagination goes mad. It gives us an edge. ;) Wonderfully done Crim..xo
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8th Oct 2016 6:10pm
Re. Alien Greetings
8th Oct 2016 7:12pm
Truly inspired Crim! I always suspected you were from a more advanced world. I've got my sonar detector up and going. Ping back at ya!
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8th Oct 2016 8:30pm
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