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Common Sense

caressing skin
the atmosphere
the air we breathe
together we're

linked in rhythm
in this rhyme
in and out
we're out of time

out of concepts
ideas gone
out of our minds
we're lost in song

the music of the spheres
inside
all the atoms
where we hide

resonates
in sparkling sound
with everything
that's all around

harmonizing
dissonance
from the chaos
common sense -

caressing skin
the atmosphere
the air we breathe
together we're

linked in rhythm
in this rhyme
in and out
we're out of time
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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