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Be Encouraged~
I know color spectrums in the lining
of your lunar heart won’t always shine
in ethereal radiance...
Won’t always embrace the warmth
of salaam,
but I pray…
I really do,
that you comprehend and see that even nightfall
is created with predominant vibrancy,
those snowy silvers, heroic hues, brutal days
of unyielding fortitude.
I pray the same extremities that
interlace pledges and promises within mine
discover space and measured time to
misplace it’s inhale moving aimlessly
in your yesterdays and an infinity
that knows no rouge.
Grief… will certainly select its numbers.
It will position itself at the lottery level,
a mega million reasons and ways
to allow misery to be the power play,
while pain and loneliness stand in line
with anticipatory scratch-offs.
I pray you feel the sincerity of my heart
beating in soft cadence and incantations
of comforting rhymes,
when I tell you to keep your head up…
hold on,
believe...
because great vibrations don’t pause for
superficial waves,
absolute lines remain lethargic in wait
just to bathe your intellectual gifts
with a daily dose of daily bread…
when your true conviction... is to feed your soul.
Stay encouraged.
Be encouraged.
Rain~
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Re. Be Encouraged~
Anonymous
5th Oct 2016 9:02pm
Such a beautiful, uplifting write.
Truly adore this lovely ink 💓
Truly adore this lovely ink 💓
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6th Oct 2016 5:52am
Thank you WTHeart! :) My spirit has been so content as of late, thought I'd shared a few words to uplift someone...
Re. Be Encouraged~
5th Oct 2016 10:40pm
The entire thing is beautifully and palpably heartfelt, Rain.
However, this is absolutely stunning:
that you comprehend and see that even nightfall
is created with predominant vibrancy,
those snowy silvers, heroic hues, brutal days
of unyielding fortitude.
Thank you for sharing.
However, this is absolutely stunning:
that you comprehend and see that even nightfall
is created with predominant vibrancy,
those snowy silvers, heroic hues, brutal days
of unyielding fortitude.
Thank you for sharing.
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6th Oct 2016 5:59am
Thank you so much Ahavati, means a lot! :)
The colorful beauty of nightfall, the hidden light in the darkness, if you will. :) Glad you enjoyed that stanza...
The colorful beauty of nightfall, the hidden light in the darkness, if you will. :) Glad you enjoyed that stanza...
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2016 2:00am
There's such positive message and energy in this poem Rain, i think we can all use this now and then to refocus and stay true to ourselves. So many beautiful lines with such beauty and warmth, you got the gift beautiful lady xo
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6th Oct 2016 6:07am
Thank you so much Vee! :) That was the objective... to ink a positive vibe, inspirational words that can lend a little hope to someone.
Our greatest struggles are the most triumphant, once we've conquered. xo
Our greatest struggles are the most triumphant, once we've conquered. xo
Re. Be Encouraged~
6th Oct 2016 3:05am
What an incredibly beautiful positive message. I very much like this one. I rather needed to read something like this today.
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I'm so pleased to hear my words came at a time of need for you, Willow. :) Thank you beautiful lady.
Rooted, but you flow~
Rooted, but you flow~
Re. Be Encouraged~
6th Oct 2016 3:42am
Heartwarming touches amid a vividly colorful field of imagery!
Gave me waves of goose-bumps...
JJ
Gave me waves of goose-bumps...
JJ
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6th Oct 2016 6:14am
...'goose-bumps', I'll take'em! :) Such a cool response, JJ!
Thanks hun....
Thanks hun....
Re. Be Encouraged~
6th Oct 2016 4:09pm
Oh my, my, my..... My dearest Rain this piece was absolutely amazing.... I love the soft flow to it, the word play, the encouragement in this piece speaks volumes of depth that just soothes the soul and let's you know every little thing is going to be alright... I love the way you wrote this.... Such imagery....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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8th Oct 2016 4:31pm
Lovely BSavvy, so happy to feel your encouraging presence around here. You've been missed friend. Your words are always comforting! Thankya sweetheart and glad you're cyber-shelving her. :)
Re. Be Encouraged~
6th Oct 2016 6:15pm
I feel the sincerity of your heart, lovely Rain!
You are a breath of fresh air with your lyrical vibrations...
Stay encouraged.
Be encouraged. > such a strong ending to an empowering piece!
You are a breath of fresh air with your lyrical vibrations...
Stay encouraged.
Be encouraged. > such a strong ending to an empowering piece!
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8th Oct 2016 5:11pm
"You are a breath of fresh air with your lyrical vibrations... "
^^^^^^^^that is such a positive and flattering thing to say, Duende. :)
Thank you sweety!
^^^^^^^^that is such a positive and flattering thing to say, Duende. :)
Thank you sweety!
Re. Be Encouraged~
7th Oct 2016 1:16am
A great, power-full message/prayer... Exceptional!!
"inhale moving aimlessly
in your yesterdays and an infinity
that knows no rouge..." That hit me like a sledgehammer. :)
"inhale moving aimlessly
in your yesterdays and an infinity
that knows no rouge..." That hit me like a sledgehammer. :)
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8th Oct 2016 5:36pm
Oh Poe, I love when I say something so meaningful it causes pause to the reader. Thanks a bunch luv.... :)
Re. Be Encouraged~
7th Oct 2016 4:28am
has the beautiful tones of a lyre to inspire, strange I got a taste for crackers and wine now lol,#nice goddess...
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8th Oct 2016 5:38pm
Thanks luv, I am always on cloud nine when you swallow my words...
Adore you for listing her... xo
Adore you for listing her... xo
Re. Be Encouraged~
14th Oct 2016 11:47am
Absolutely love this... beautiful words from a beautiful soul. I'm going to try to remember this piece when I'm having a shitty day
~ Kitty xoxo
~ Kitty xoxo
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aww Kitty....what a delightful vibe your spirit brings to my page. :) I'm so stoked to see you,..... it's been so long. Thank you darlin'! xo
btw.... that profile pic is HAWT!!!!
btw.... that profile pic is HAWT!!!!
Re. Be Encouraged~
Anonymous
16th Oct 2016 2:11am
Lady Rain.. feel the positive energy in this ink.. so brilliantly crafted.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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16th Oct 2016 2:48am
Positive energy was indeed the objective, Dave. :) Pleased that you could feel it!
Thanks luv...... xo
Thanks luv...... xo
Re. Be Encouraged~
25th Oct 2016 5:38am
Positive energy. It's free and yet so valuable. You created some of it with this piece.
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25th Oct 2016 6:04am