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just a simpleton
do not try to find meaning
for there is simply none
told you a hundred times
am just a simpleton!
said I loved your smile
don't care 'bout the reason
for me i don' know guile
and always loved the freedom
call me a hollow man
or a man full of air
you see what you see
and don' what's not there!
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Re. just a simpleton
4th Oct 2016 7:07pm
I love this! Simple it may be, but I sincerely doubt you are a simpleton! :)
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
5th Oct 2016 3:36pm
Welcome dear Willows! I respect your doubts but you see what you see! Am glad you liked this read and thank you for the kind words!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. just a simpleton
Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 10:36pm
If we all found meaning in everyone there`d be no mystery ... clever write, KD ... made me smile *deviously* ... ~Devlin.
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
5th Oct 2016 3:38pm
couldn't agree more Ms DLC!! welcome your presence and kind compliment! Your "devious" smile....hmmmm... well as I said before... all i care is and am happy about is you smile not the reason behind ;-) thank you once again!!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. just a simpleton
Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 11:00pm
I've found that some who claim to be simple, particularly in their wants and desires, have remarkably complex minds. This piece made me smile. Nicely done. :-)
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
5th Oct 2016 3:42pm
Welcome MsKeys!
thank you for your kind remarks... I respect your experience and have no doubt about your conclusion...and at the same time,there are some exceptions too! I am glad that it made you smile! scribble was worth the effort then!! Thank You so much once again!
Cheers!
KDAmB
thank you for your kind remarks... I respect your experience and have no doubt about your conclusion...and at the same time,there are some exceptions too! I am glad that it made you smile! scribble was worth the effort then!! Thank You so much once again!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. just a simpleton
Anonymous
5th Oct 2016 7:17am
Simple AND witty. Better than simple and plain, heh. Lovely little sentiment.
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
5th Oct 2016 3:46pm
Welcome Miss_Sub!
thank You so much for your visit and kind feedback. Yes, I note and agree with your "AND" . Simple indeed doesn't have to be just simple and plain. For totally unrelated reason, your remark of witty reminds me of our beloved friend David Macleod whom I am missing so much here.
Thank You so much once again!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
thank You so much for your visit and kind feedback. Yes, I note and agree with your "AND" . Simple indeed doesn't have to be just simple and plain. For totally unrelated reason, your remark of witty reminds me of our beloved friend David Macleod whom I am missing so much here.
Thank You so much once again!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. just a simpleton
5th Oct 2016 1:49pm
I am a simpleton very much in life too.
Nicely done and beautiful
ending on those last two lines.
Nicely done and beautiful
ending on those last two lines.
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
5th Oct 2016 3:52pm
Welcome dear friend Pishashee!
it is quite an extra-ordinary claim my friend if your works are anything to go by! as you've ended the sentence with "too". I appreciate your visit and keen insight sincerely.
thank You once agian!
Cheers!
KDAmB
it is quite an extra-ordinary claim my friend if your works are anything to go by! as you've ended the sentence with "too". I appreciate your visit and keen insight sincerely.
thank You once agian!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. just a simpleton
6th Oct 2016 8:56am
Re: Re. just a simpleton
6th Oct 2016 12:06pm
Welcome dear bro! Thank you sincerely! Your visit always brings a smile on my face!
Re. just a simpleton
Anonymous
6th Oct 2016 12:57pm
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
6th Oct 2016 2:23pm
Brah you humble me truly! No words enough to thank you matey!
Your perspective is mystical Nemo, that's why you see beauty in mundane and ordinary. I only stated the mystic's saying re not worrying about the reasons for the smile and staying free of guile as for me it does let me enjoy the beautiful tonic called freedom! I welcome your presence and such kind praise Brotha!
Wish you peace and tranquillity!
KDAmB
Your perspective is mystical Nemo, that's why you see beauty in mundane and ordinary. I only stated the mystic's saying re not worrying about the reasons for the smile and staying free of guile as for me it does let me enjoy the beautiful tonic called freedom! I welcome your presence and such kind praise Brotha!
Wish you peace and tranquillity!
KDAmB
Re: Re. just a simpleton
6th Oct 2016 11:10pm
Re. just a simpleton
8th Oct 2016 9:50pm
Enjoyed write..
Nice rhyme and flow.
I have to concur..
I doubt you are simple
at all.
Keith
Nice rhyme and flow.
I have to concur..
I doubt you are simple
at all.
Keith
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Re. just a simpleton
8th Oct 2016 10:00pm
Welcome Keith!
Thank you for the visit and compliments. I fully respect your doubts Sir!
regards
KDAmB
Thank you for the visit and compliments. I fully respect your doubts Sir!
regards
KDAmB
Re. just a simpleton
14th Oct 2016 3:41pm
I really enjoyed this :)
It flows beautifully.
I particularly love the last line "you see what you see and don' what's not there"
It flows beautifully.
I particularly love the last line "you see what you see and don' what's not there"
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
14th Oct 2016 4:47pm
Why thank you Kaileah! I welcome your presence and such kind appreciation! Than You so much!
KDAmB
KDAmB
Re. just a simpleton
Anonymous
15th Oct 2016 2:10pm
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Re: Re. just a simpleton
15th Oct 2016 2:19pm
5 thumbs here too bro Mitica!! welcome your visit and glad you can relate! I thank you for your generosity bro!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB