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You Need Me. (Not meant to be conceded)
I'm always
there for you.
Through and
through.
Just remember
you need me
and I don't need
you.
there for you.
Through and
through.
Just remember
you need me
and I don't need
you.
Published 31st Jul 2011
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31st Jul 2011 7:11am
Not bad by any stretch of the word ,but too simple to really read into. A good first start poem or a short burst of anger into words, but not "deep" enough to truly be criticized.
31st Jul 2011 7:14am
I'm a simple person I guess. When I do get angry it really is just short bursts. That's probably why anger will never be my best poems.
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31st Jul 2011 8:38pm
31st Jul 2011 8:53pm
A greetings card that you would give to someone you don't plan on speaking to again. Or to be found inside a fortune cookie created by a man attempting to ruin a business. I struggle to find its place inside poetry though.
