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Trial & Error

�
taken
with you
swallowed without crushing
coming down
think

it's a placebo

Written by Trixareforkids

Published 29th Sep 2016

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Re. Trial & Error

30th Sep 2016 3:18am

Loved the way the last line takes you to a place you didn't expect.

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Re. Trial & Error

30th Sep 2016 11:41am

Yes, good or bad, it's the unexpected that keeps us interested in writing and in life.

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Re. Trial & Error

10th Jan 2017 2:27am

The title does the full justice to your verse.
Short and sweet.

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10th Jan 2017 3:11am

Thank you mcjay, appreciate the comment. 💋

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