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Collared
Ironically I am collared
to your eyes
that undress
to be undressed
pleading own me
so I can show you
the bare raw passion
of this queen
leashed to your ambitions
that full wanting lips whisper
I grip your words
and silence the plea
with a single finger
pressing gently
parting your lips gently
allowing desire to unravel
I lead them commandly
and take hold of what escapes
taking control effortlessly
Published 29th Sep 2016
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G, your words captured my eyes, seized my senses, arrested my thoughts, and collared the carnal side of me.
....the wait was so well worth it ;)
#you'vebeenmissed
....the wait was so well worth it ;)
#you'vebeenmissed
29th Sep 2016 9:57am
Mmmmm...Sounds like the start of a great 'breakfast!' lol very hott stuff my friend :)
Anonymous
1st Oct 2016 2:43pm
You've always had a way with words, each line can have a different interpretation depending on how one reads it, again and again, yet always yielding the same result...mouth open looking forward to what's next...
Lovely to see your pen flow...
With love - Taryn xoxo
Lovely to see your pen flow...
With love - Taryn xoxo
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 5:08pm
Love this sensual piece.
The words flow and capture the senses.
Beautiful ....passionate ink 💓
The words flow and capture the senses.
Beautiful ....passionate ink 💓
21st Nov 2016 00:38am
I absolutely adore how you romanticize basically being chained to someone, it's not trapped if you're in love.
16th Mar 2017 5:51pm
I havent been around in quite awhile. Coming back to such a read makes being back soooo well worth it Sir
24th Apr 2017 6:51pm
9th Jan 2020 00:02am
Loved your wordplay in this sensual piece! Great writing, Awakenedsoul :)
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2022 1:45pm
Splendid
22nd Jul 2023 5:38pm
