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We speed
down this highway
ignoring the signs
but enjoying the neon
vacancy
a place to rest
our heads, eyes
glossing over
fine print lines
on the way
to magic
fingers
beds
we don't have to make
just lie
in
try to remember
to leave
a tip
turn off the water
on the way out
We speed
down this highway
ignoring the signs
but enjoying the neon
vacancy
a place to rest
our heads, eyes
glossing over
fine print lines
on the way
to magic
fingers
beds
we don't have to make
just lie
in
try to remember
to leave
a tip
turn off the water
on the way out
Published 28th Sep 2016
| Edited 22nd Jun 2017
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28th Sep 2016 10:10pm
28th Sep 2016 10:28pm
To quote an old song "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose"
Thanks for stopping by doll
Thanks for stopping by doll
29th Sep 2016 3:00am
29th Sep 2016 10:07am
29th Sep 2016 6:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Oct 2016 3:13am
11th Oct 2016 3:11am
You say leaving
I look at this one as more
RUNNING
hocking the house, the baggage and maybe a kidney
To just have the freedom to fucking drive
To the next place
Where all thats left after the do not disturb signs and the messed up room is the lingering scent of freedom
"Ignoring the signs"
Allusion to the leaving, the questions?
Turn off the water on the way our, so polite of you
Thanks for the read
I look at this one as more
RUNNING
hocking the house, the baggage and maybe a kidney
To just have the freedom to fucking drive
To the next place
Where all thats left after the do not disturb signs and the messed up room is the lingering scent of freedom
"Ignoring the signs"
Allusion to the leaving, the questions?
Turn off the water on the way our, so polite of you
Thanks for the read
11th Oct 2016 5:19am
As the late great sang "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose..."
Thanks for the stop, drop and roll doll.
Thanks for the stop, drop and roll doll.
Anonymous
15th Jan 2017 10:58am
Some of the best lines I've read in a while...
"but enjoying the neon
vacancy "
"glossing over
fine print lines
on the way
to magic "
"but enjoying the neon
vacancy "
"glossing over
fine print lines
on the way
to magic "
15th Jan 2017 8:58pm
22nd Jun 2017 3:26am
Leaving our responsibilities behind for a while. There is no greater feeling, surely? This poem has a real rock drive, 'made for the highway' vibe about it.
ZZ Top, Motorhead & all that! ;-)
ZZ Top, Motorhead & all that! ;-)
