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dirty girl
I feel like a naughty little girl
carousing in a grown man's sex shop
sucking on a lollipop
with hopes of releasing your beast
teach me a lesson
I've been a tease
a peep show harlot
from the red light district
feigning innocence
let you taste the goods
then withhold favors
man of the world
you frighten and intrigue
your sexcapades make me cream
pornographic thoughts
of a rough fist bruising tight lips
dance through my mind
as I restlessly try to bed thoughts of you
I could have another
my sights are on you
i'm locked and loaded
ready to go off
under your Masterful touch
your schoolgirl whore
bend me over while you pound my ass
until it looks like a gaping black hole
then spit on this cum drunk slut
pussy pulsating begging for more
leave me ravenous
fucked by a beastly man
ruler slapped to swollen clit
taught by Lucifer himself
catechism for the depraved
burned by lust
utterly consumed
I dance in the flames of desire
writhing in agony
a taste of the devil's sex
one sip, left utterly ruined
Published 23rd Sep 2016
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23rd Sep 2016 4:24am
I think you have touched many a grown man's fantasy in this sizzling
hot write. Yummy visuals and sexy lines. Thoroughly enjoyed this hot
write.
Keith
hot write. Yummy visuals and sexy lines. Thoroughly enjoyed this hot
write.
Keith
23rd Sep 2016 5:13am
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2016 5:56am
Ravenous Crim ... even Lucifer would *blush* as I have blushed ... sexy dirty ink; this piece speaks volumes .... love to you ... ~Devlin.
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23rd Sep 2016 2:07pm
Very erotic, hot and sizzling. U paint a very vivid image as to wht to expect :)
24th Sep 2016 11:41am
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2016 2:34pm
I must first pick my jaw up off the floor before I can utter a word. This was intense! :)
24th Sep 2016 11:42am
23rd Sep 2016 6:54pm
This is one hell of a wickedly sexy write!
I can envision you with a lollipop in a sex shop ;-)
Love, Duende
I can envision you with a lollipop in a sex shop ;-)
Love, Duende
24th Sep 2016 11:42am
23rd Sep 2016 6:56pm
That's some real shit not in a perverted way but a reality in which I've lived in .
24th Sep 2016 11:42am
23rd Sep 2016 9:57pm
Your agony is my ecstasy, Crim. This is an erotic applied with whip and blade, a love letter to your Master, who might be a certain gent of wealth and taste. You've been a VERY dirty girl and complete delight, ruination be damned.
24th Sep 2016 11:43am
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23rd Sep 2016 11:25pm
Mmmm you lusty lil slut!! Cum here n give me done of ALL that hot ass lol... Oops sorry got carried away, but hey it's ur fault for being so naughty! lol
24th Sep 2016 11:45am
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2016 2:48am
Brenda.. simply amazing.. brutally truthful.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
24th Sep 2016 11:46am
25th Sep 2016 1:51am
hard dirty sex that leaves us released & ruined;
I can hear Lana Del Ray singing
hey Lolita hey!
lush lustful lyrics, Crim...
I can hear Lana Del Ray singing
hey Lolita hey!
lush lustful lyrics, Crim...
25th Sep 2016 7:33am
Anonymous
1st Oct 2016 10:27pm
My Beautiful Brenda....my sweet dripping pearls....this was a dreamy and exciting erotic lovely one...these lines!! THESE LINES!!!!
"pornographic thoughts
of a rough fist bruising tight lips
dance through my mind"
*
"then spit on this cum drunk slut
pussy pulsating begging for more
leave me ravenous"
*
"burned by lust
utterly consumed
I dance in the flames of desire
writhing in agony"
Oh the visions I see before me making me squirm and get all squishee....
I love this and I love you...
xoxoxo Taryn
"pornographic thoughts
of a rough fist bruising tight lips
dance through my mind"
*
"then spit on this cum drunk slut
pussy pulsating begging for more
leave me ravenous"
*
"burned by lust
utterly consumed
I dance in the flames of desire
writhing in agony"
Oh the visions I see before me making me squirm and get all squishee....
I love this and I love you...
xoxoxo Taryn
2nd Oct 2016 11:44am
I adore your beautiful reaction and comment on the write lovely one made me smile wide :)
I love you..
xo Brenda
I love you..
xo Brenda
