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Woodstock, that was the last great trip.
there is so much beauty in the cracked things, Crim;
the beauty of the broken...

thank you John for seeing beauty in the broken..

love Crim

I did a lot of acid
Orange sunshine was the most fun
Purple Haze was a mind fucker
Read once back then during that time that people who did acid didn't consider it a good trip unless it was a bad trip ....

Like this ink sister

thank you Poet happy you enjoyed the trip..

love Brenda

You make broken...look beautiful.
Your strength is always reflected in your words.
Another brilliant piece, lovely Crim 💓

thank you lovely Heart for seeing beauty in broken..

love Crim

Brenda.. i'm with Poet.. purple haze is a mind fucker.. and no i wasn't there, or ever done acid.. But Jimi, and this time era was beautiful.. brilliant ink..



Dave

thank you Dave I wasn't there either the bad acid trip is me at times lol..

love Brenda

this is amazing stuff!

thank you kindly..

love Crim

The first two stanzas remind me of my house...

Great piece of ink, dear Crim!
Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende my mind is the madhouse lol :)  
 
love Crim

Haha, silly me ;-)

My mind is kind of a madhouse as well and my house, well...

no my lovely not silly at all this write is quite veiled I think..

love Crim

what a compliment thank you dearest Amelia.. thank you indeed they do..

love Crim

Your ink is transcending, my Queen ... you`re spreading wings and soaring to places quite inspirational & quaint ... love to you, Lady and your newfound pen ... ~Devlin

thank you my Queen for noticing my evolution..

love Brenda

goddamn....i thunk i was gonna have to scroll forever to find some place to put my idiot th'oughts on this brilliant poom.....glad i haven't so many admirers to answer to..........if i was gonna say anything pertinent, i forgot what it was.  
PS: in aug'69(17yrs old) i was 4/5ths of the way to Woodstock in a VWbug w/2friends(from home on Long Island) & the traffic was so backed up on hiway 17, that wee turned back, & went to Montauk Point instead to sit around, get stoned, listen to The Music via 8track car tape player, & feed the giant mosquitos, never imagining that we was missing more than just another fckn concert.    Ah, yes - a past so long, & a future approaching non-eXistence.......watta fckn world wee've made.......bless ye Bren

thank you Daniel for the fantastic comment and sharing your own personal experiences love ya..

xo Brenda

The grammar in this one is warped and twisting, but in a good way, as it creates a dark and surreal narrative-voice, and there's a rich sense of place in phrases like "Plaster of Paris" and references to things like Woodstock. Thank you very much for the read. - Jack xxx

thank you Jack a better compliment I couldn't hope to receive..

love Brenda

I almost get a lysergic flashback reading this Crim.

"a bad LSD trip          
flower child this is no Woodstock          
the music is playing on an endless loop"

I'm glad your don't romanticize '60s memories, flower power being a thing of the past.   I'll still listen to "The Sound of Silence" anytime at all.

thank you Sir Crow my mind is a bad trip lately..

love Crim

Dammn

yes..

you just shove your way through me,.
but my day is made, I need'd a piece of
you to finish it off..

Shall your inkyself will never perish


-Howlings

my lovely Howlings thank you dearest lady for feeling my pain..

love Crim

wow, your art is amazing in any tone, the real ain't always pretty, but pressure can make diamonds, glisten on crim...

thank you Dean you got exactly what I was relating in this write..

love Crim

From a carbon to a diamond, Brenda.
That you are.

aw thank you graciously lovely Sage one you're too kind..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, I could live an eternity hearing such things from you...your pen knows no limits and as always, you leave me astounded...

"the halls echo voices          
reverberated laughter          
make me tremble at midnight          
           
*          
           
taste my insanity          
I promise one drink will be enough          
poisoned you won't want another"
~ loved these lines and how they tempt me...I raise my glass for another thank you...

I love you :)

xoxoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one for taking another drink from my glass :)

I love you!

xo Brenda