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His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
My love for him is out of this world.
I even think love is a small word compare to what i feel for him
I am enchanted by his beauty, romanced by his words, drunk in love with his kisses
and yes ;he is a great fuck!
I have a battle between real and delusional
I can't control myself anymore.
My heart bits can't be measured.
When he is in the other side of the screen, giving me his love.
We share things together , we pray , we laugh , we cry , we make love and more...
I am in love with a stranger
I don't know if he is real or not.
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He put a spell on me
He knows i can't stand it
I can feel his arms around me, his kisses , i can even feel his cock inside me, his tongue in my clit.
His love embraces me.
I see him everywhere like , i feel i've been watch every minute.
I have no eyes for another man
I see my life by his side
All i want in a man, he posses.
I am so afraid of this feelings
I pray to my God to protect my mind and keep me sane.
My mind because my heart i don't have anymore. He owns it now.
I am in love with this man
and I really hope for the best.
I even think love is a small word compare to what i feel for him
I am enchanted by his beauty, romanced by his words, drunk in love with his kisses
and yes ;he is a great fuck!
I have a battle between real and delusional
I can't control myself anymore.
My heart bits can't be measured.
When he is in the other side of the screen, giving me his love.
We share things together , we pray , we laugh , we cry , we make love and more...
I am in love with a stranger
I don't know if he is real or not.
________________________ _________________________ _______________________ ________________________
He put a spell on me
He knows i can't stand it
I can feel his arms around me, his kisses , i can even feel his cock inside me, his tongue in my clit.
His love embraces me.
I see him everywhere like , i feel i've been watch every minute.
I have no eyes for another man
I see my life by his side
All i want in a man, he posses.
I am so afraid of this feelings
I pray to my God to protect my mind and keep me sane.
My mind because my heart i don't have anymore. He owns it now.
I am in love with this man
and I really hope for the best.
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Re. His touch drives me insane!
22nd Sep 2016 1:17pm
It is frank, direct to the point, no bullshit poetry. Welcome to the Underground.
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22nd Sep 2016 1:22pm
Re. His touch drives me insane!
22nd Sep 2016 3:13pm
Well if it's true you have no interest in any other man...guess you're as they say: lost...in love
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22nd Sep 2016 4:29pm
Re. His touch drives me insane!
22nd Sep 2016 3:35pm
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22nd Sep 2016 4:29pm
Re. His touch drives me insane!
22nd Sep 2016 4:07pm
Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
22nd Sep 2016 10:00pm
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Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
23rd Sep 2016 11:50am
Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
23rd Sep 2016 1:15pm
You're living in the 2nd life. Been there. Love is easy there, no bills to pay
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23rd Sep 2016 1:25pm
Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
25th Sep 2016 8:23pm
First off my apologies I have been stuck in the dark ages.Secondly the poem is well written until dear mystery man is a stranger.I mean you can't say in one stanza before that you experience so much with him then the next thing the reader knows he's a stranger.Be careful about that...nicely written piece.(For erotic pieces be more descriptive).again apologies for my late response
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Re: Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
26th Sep 2016 1:25pm
Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
27th Oct 2016 10:13pm
I have a battle between
real =====2 to 3 minutes jam jam bang bang
and
delusional....12 hours it never cummmmmmmms
ask any one
real =====2 to 3 minutes jam jam bang bang
and
delusional....12 hours it never cummmmmmmms
ask any one
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Re. His touch drives me insane! FUCK!!!
28th Oct 2016 3:16am