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Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
foreverโs not lost
come closer
no regrets this time
letโs start over
new, better memories
getting past vanity
rather have crazy
sweet insanity
that feeling
you give
that no one else could
yesterday is gone
masks removed
barriers down
our love is still
strong
my heart pulses
your name
my body pleads
your claim
I need you
come to me
I'm here
just accept
feel my digits
on your skin
place your lips
on my lips
don't pull back
let it sink in
down into your core
the way it was before
help me remember
and help me forget
my eyes close
I feel you
emotions flood
a tear slowly falls
comfort and pain
collide
please don't stop
no other taste as you do
your body fits
perfectly with mine
everything about you
feels right
I need you
tonight
made our vows
tripped and fell
fleeted moments
all forgotten
in this moment
when I take you
and you take me
vicious
but I love the feeling
the way it was meant to be
it's destiny
intense passion
consumed
flesh upon flesh
bodies entangled
hearts linked
reconnected
your breath
is in my lungs
I feel your blood
flow through
my veins
you belong
to me
as I belong
to you
please
stay
come closer
no regrets this time
letโs start over
new, better memories
getting past vanity
rather have crazy
sweet insanity
that feeling
you give
that no one else could
yesterday is gone
masks removed
barriers down
our love is still
strong
my heart pulses
your name
my body pleads
your claim
I need you
come to me
I'm here
just accept
feel my digits
on your skin
place your lips
on my lips
don't pull back
let it sink in
down into your core
the way it was before
help me remember
and help me forget
my eyes close
I feel you
emotions flood
a tear slowly falls
comfort and pain
collide
please don't stop
no other taste as you do
your body fits
perfectly with mine
everything about you
feels right
I need you
tonight
made our vows
tripped and fell
fleeted moments
all forgotten
in this moment
when I take you
and you take me
vicious
but I love the feeling
the way it was meant to be
it's destiny
intense passion
consumed
flesh upon flesh
bodies entangled
hearts linked
reconnected
your breath
is in my lungs
I feel your blood
flow through
my veins
you belong
to me
as I belong
to you
please
stay
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Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2016 11:40am
DC...I enjoyed writing this piece with you, so very much! ๐
Thank you for the invitation.
It was a true effortless pleasure.
You are fantastic, and I love the way this turned out.
Much love to you, my friend.
Thank you for the invitation.
It was a true effortless pleasure.
You are fantastic, and I love the way this turned out.
Much love to you, my friend.

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Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 11:43am
If this was the last co-write I do then I would be happy with that ^^ It came out perfect. Has a deeper meaning to me personally too. Was happy to do this with a friend such as yourself. Much thanks to you Heart.
Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 11:46am
OMG, you guys rock!!!
This is an insanely good duet!!!
I'm not sure who wrote what, but that first stanza made me smile (you know why)
help me remember
and help me forget > this brought me to tears...
Thank you for sharing such an intimate collaboration with us!
This is an insanely good duet!!!
I'm not sure who wrote what, but that first stanza made me smile (you know why)
help me remember
and help me forget > this brought me to tears...
Thank you for sharing such an intimate collaboration with us!
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Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 4:51pm
You have me so happy that a talent such as yourself would say that. I myself think this poem is very special. Heart did an amazing job.
Glad you enjoyed
As for who wrote what
I kind of like that it's not that easy to tell. You can look at it at different points of view ๐ I'll let you decide who wrote what ๐
Glad you enjoyed
As for who wrote what
I kind of like that it's not that easy to tell. You can look at it at different points of view ๐ I'll let you decide who wrote what ๐
Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 5:03pm
You have me so happy now, that you call me a talent :-)
I like it when two people blend so well that it's hard to tell who wrote what!
P.S. I already decided :-p
I like it when two people blend so well that it's hard to tell who wrote what!
P.S. I already decided :-p
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Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 11:51am
Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 4:53pm
Two friends coming together can make magic. It was truly awesome to work with Heart.
Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 12:16pm
Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 4:54pm
That is such an awesome thing to say. I'm sure it makes Heart smile too.
Thank you!
Thank you!
Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 1:06pm
Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 4:56pm
It was a different way of writing for me. I wanted to try something new with this one.
Thanks for reading and enjoying ๐
Thanks for reading and enjoying ๐
Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
Beautiful.
Isn't it just lovely the wonderful boundaries that are pushed and the curves of learning that come from collaboration?
This piece is great. You have both shown wonderful tallent here!
Blue Skies and Love @ You
Al -x-
Isn't it just lovely the wonderful boundaries that are pushed and the curves of learning that come from collaboration?
This piece is great. You have both shown wonderful tallent here!
Blue Skies and Love @ You
Al -x-
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Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 5:02pm
No. It was horrible. She hated me and I hated her. The whole time we called each other names like " ice cream face". We thought about quitting, but we both got to a point where we just wanted to show the other up... I think I can safely say I win ๐
Thank you for the read and comment ๐
Thank you for the read and comment ๐
Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
23rd Sep 2016 9:48am
Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 2:15pm
Your voices merge so flawlessly here, in this wholly gorgeous and breathtaking piece. It truly is exquisite! :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 5:05pm
Thanks so much willow.
Truly put a smile on my face that you say that.
Me and Heart thank you very much!
We are putting together a team we're calling "The Devil's Heart". She just doesn't know it yet ๐
Truly put a smile on my face that you say that.
Me and Heart thank you very much!
We are putting together a team we're calling "The Devil's Heart". She just doesn't know it yet ๐
Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
23rd Sep 2016 1:54pm
Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2016 3:20pm
DC & Lady H ... stellar pens & sensual minds ... The contrast, parallel; the imagery, vivid with a beautiful weave of words ... Congrats, you two ... Enjoyed, immensely ... ~xo, Devlin.

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Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
22nd Sep 2016 5:07pm
Thanks very much! So happy to hear such a great talent as yourself enjoyed. We must of done something right ๐ฌ
Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
27th Sep 2016 4:13am
You two did a beautiful job here.
..thank you both for the loveliness
-Howlings
..thank you both for the loveliness
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Stay (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
27th Sep 2016 7:29am