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Love or fairytale?
I dream with a man that will be perfect for me and I will be perfect for him.
I have it all in my head.
I refuse to think it is a fairytale!
My friends call me crazy because I believe in the promise land of love.
Could be possible that someone loves the way I do?
Could be possible that someone has my same faith in love?
Can be someone as commited I am , to love?
This is my idea of Promise Land in love :
Two people crazy In love with each other.
They work as a team, fight for each other's happiness.
Overcome obstacles together, protect each other and dream of a better future.
Is this to much to ask?
I am turning 40 this year and i have never experience something like it.
Is what i desire; love or a fairytale?
If is a fairytale guys; I wish Walt Disney gets resurrected and wishes to marry me!
Love ya!!!!
I have it all in my head.
I refuse to think it is a fairytale!
My friends call me crazy because I believe in the promise land of love.
Could be possible that someone loves the way I do?
Could be possible that someone has my same faith in love?
Can be someone as commited I am , to love?
This is my idea of Promise Land in love :
Two people crazy In love with each other.
They work as a team, fight for each other's happiness.
Overcome obstacles together, protect each other and dream of a better future.
Is this to much to ask?
I am turning 40 this year and i have never experience something like it.
Is what i desire; love or a fairytale?
If is a fairytale guys; I wish Walt Disney gets resurrected and wishes to marry me!
Love ya!!!!
Published 21st Sep 2016
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21st Sep 2016 7:35am
There be love for everyone willing to search and fight for it
It seldom just falls into ones lap
But that's just my opinion 😊
Love the ending of this write 😆
It seldom just falls into ones lap
But that's just my opinion 😊
Love the ending of this write 😆
21st Sep 2016 9:55am
21st Sep 2016 1:29pm
lawd, if i could be this optimistic about love at 40...
ltm
i'm not usually one for upbeat love poems
but this really works for me
because of it's authenticity
thanks for sharing
xo
ltm
i'm not usually one for upbeat love poems
but this really works for me
because of it's authenticity
thanks for sharing
xo
21st Sep 2016 1:53pm
23rd Sep 2016 10:09pm
CS Lewis wrote, if I recall correctly, true love is not about wanting the right person but also being the right person - a perspective often missing -, so I agree with the first line.
I warm to these lines:
Two people crazy In love with each other.
They work as a team, fight for each other's happiness.
Overcome obstacles together, protect each other and dream of a better future.
(So often couples work apart and the only fighting is between each other rather than for each other.)
You sound like someone who refuses to be defeated about finding love, I respect such resilience and perseverance.
I warm to these lines:
Two people crazy In love with each other.
They work as a team, fight for each other's happiness.
Overcome obstacles together, protect each other and dream of a better future.
(So often couples work apart and the only fighting is between each other rather than for each other.)
You sound like someone who refuses to be defeated about finding love, I respect such resilience and perseverance.
24th Sep 2016 6:55pm
Thank you very much!
I Believe in love I have faith and I will commit to my King when the time comes.
I Believe in love I have faith and I will commit to my King when the time comes.
24th Sep 2016 9:05pm
Biblically, I think best example of a couple crazy for each other are the one that describe each other in the Song of Songs, aka Song of Solomon (which inspired my user name).
