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Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
Love can be seen
Within the eyes of (a) man
Reflections of autumn wind and deep
terracotta sunsets,whisper of unspoken want
If he could catch it
And squeeze it in his shaking fist
It would only crumble in his palm, slipping
through his fingers like particulate butterfly dust
Acts that would be dirty with any other man
Are voluptuous decadence with him
I would make wounds on him in burnished grass
If the river was khaki & the sky was umber
There are times when I can't see the pillars
Of trees or hills, clouds do not end or begin
When I am in love
I am embraced by aphasial splashes of color
My lover paints me in the abstract art of tragedy
Van Gogh’s Rhone, fostered from the blood of his dementia
My years of intolerant rains & consumptive tears
He adjures me to forget, but I cannot
He tells me to search my womanly pavilions
For the poem of my scandalous nature
My fingers travel and do not find poetry
Only his brazen kiss that liquifies between my thighs
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Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
12th Sep 2016 10:16am
We traveled to an amazing place, Kas;
we contemplated & labored & maybe cried a little,
& we made this, which was born without a name,
so we called it poetry...
we contemplated & labored & maybe cried a little,
& we made this, which was born without a name,
so we called it poetry...
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Re: Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
12th Sep 2016 10:29am
Yes we did,John,a very amazing place
It was so beautiful that it had to be called poetry.
Thanks for so many pretty words,such a sweet guy...
It was so beautiful that it had to be called poetry.
Thanks for so many pretty words,such a sweet guy...
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
12th Sep 2016 11:08am
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12th Sep 2016 11:55am
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
12th Sep 2016 1:15pm
Such an enchanting piece!
This is the first time I read a collab where I find it hard to see who wrote what, you two blend so beautiful together!
Poetry? Art? Doesn't mather what you call it... it's a sensual masterpiece!
This is the first time I read a collab where I find it hard to see who wrote what, you two blend so beautiful together!
Poetry? Art? Doesn't mather what you call it... it's a sensual masterpiece!
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Re: Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
13th Sep 2016 4:26am
What a wonderful compliment,Duende,I think the blending was one of the things that made this such an enjoyable write.
Thanks for stopping to share your thoughts,so kind....
Thanks for stopping to share your thoughts,so kind....
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
12th Sep 2016 8:29pm
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13th Sep 2016 4:41am
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
Anonymous
12th Sep 2016 9:14pm
Ah, the King of Noir and Lady Kasai. . .an excellent duo in love & poetry. . .Enjoyed, immensely. . .love to you both. . .~Devlin.

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Re: Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
13th Sep 2016 4:39am
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
12th Sep 2016 9:53pm
What a wonderfully composed symphony of words by two poets. The delicate entwined
with the firm; the feminine contrasting the masculine; the two voices singing as one.
Well done, you two.
with the firm; the feminine contrasting the masculine; the two voices singing as one.
Well done, you two.
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Re: Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
13th Sep 2016 4:33am
Ahavati,I really enjoy your stopping by with your amazing insights,
Each comment like a mini poem
Thankyou so much...
Each comment like a mini poem
Thankyou so much...
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
14th Sep 2016 7:43am
You two are cosmically made for this!
your inks twine around me and I
never want to be free of their weaving
spells..
Mygaaawd..
-Howlings
your inks twine around me and I
never want to be free of their weaving
spells..
Mygaaawd..
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
15th Sep 2016 00:21am
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
24th Sep 2016 00:18am
Simple...I love this Kasai...you and John writing together are a match made in heaven... :-)
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24th Sep 2016 00:56am
Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
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Re: Re. Terracotta ( with JohnFeddeler )
11th Nov 2016 5:38am
The colorful work of creative minds can paint quite a picture, glad you enjoyed the final result.
Thanks for sharing the kind words...
Thanks for sharing the kind words...