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~cherished one~with diamonddave75
frail yet strong
pale beauty
silent raindrops
christen you
i adore
from afar
witnessing
elegance
*
naked and vulnerable
you wash away my sin
with a warm summer's shower
caressing my tender spots
all nature taking in our love
you call to me in my quiet time
pulling me out of the depths
with your gentle lilt
as delicate as a wind chime
soothing the ache
covering my shame in beauty
*
long distance
admirer
like a portrait
you talk to me
cruel undertones
dark clouds
that glimmer
in sunlight
*
whispering my sadness
carried away on the breeze
to your listening ears
you are the thunder
that quiets my demons
the sunshine in a darkened heart
with a torrent of compassion
you cleanse a tormented soul
in your light i shine
*
so humbled
by art
divine one
shining star
my teardrops
kiss your faith
we are one
in troubled times
*
~reflected in the pools of your eyes I am cherished~
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 25th Aug 2016
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Re. ~cherished one~with diamonddave75
Anonymous
25th Aug 2016 2:43am
Brenda.. it still amazes me, what you and i are capable of.. this is so beautiful.. i'm always honored to dance with you, and create.. you make it so easy.. i adore you lovely one.. always your dance partner.. i love you!!
Dave
Dave

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25th Aug 2016 3:19am
thank you my dear friend you gave me a touch of magic on a rainy day :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~cherished one~with diamonddave75
25th Aug 2016 2:53am
Un.Belieav.Able! You two make an exquisite team. Absolute pleasure to read. :)
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2016 4:34am
A breathtaking emotional piece.
This radiates beauty.
You both created a beautiful love story. 💓
Well done.
This radiates beauty.
You both created a beautiful love story. 💓
Well done.

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25th Aug 2016 8:12am
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25th Aug 2016 5:26am
No words do honor to the beauty and delicateness in this poem!
My favorite collab from the two of you so far, your really bring out the best of each other ♥
Love, Duende
My favorite collab from the two of you so far, your really bring out the best of each other ♥
Love, Duende
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25th Aug 2016 8:13am
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2016 6:13am
Another superb collab. . .Man, how I wished I had the strength and the will. . .My pen's off to the both of you. . .love to you, my Queen. . .~Devlin.

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25th Aug 2016 8:14am
thank you graciously my Queen from us both I was feeling sad and Dave helped brighten my day :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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25th Aug 2016 7:41am
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25th Aug 2016 9:17am
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25th Aug 2016 9:28am
thank you graciously from us both was a rainy day for me Dave made it one of magic :)
love Crim
love Crim
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26th Aug 2016 2:09pm
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Within your words you have unbridled beauty even though
sometimes your dark attempts to cover that beauty up . . .
Thumbs up to you, Brenda!
sometimes your dark attempts to cover that beauty up . . .
Thumbs up to you, Brenda!
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26th Aug 2016 2:11pm
thank you most kindly Jerry from us both.. it's funny you should say that because when I wrote this with Dave I was feeling vulnerable and my first instinct was to go dark and he thought we should go with how I was feeling.. happy you enjoyed this :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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26th Aug 2016 2:12pm
thank you lovely Amelia from us both happy to know it gave you such a feeling :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. ~cherished one~with diamonddave75
25th Aug 2016 10:08pm
An excellent collaboration, a tribute to love and healing conducted with thunder.
"whispering my sadness
carried away on the breeze
to your listening ears
you are the thunder
that quiets my demons"
This is one to cherish and add to the archives. Wonderful work from you both!
"whispering my sadness
carried away on the breeze
to your listening ears
you are the thunder
that quiets my demons"
This is one to cherish and add to the archives. Wonderful work from you both!
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26th Aug 2016 2:13pm
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2016 1:07am
My Beautiful Brenda, my dear brother......breathtaking and filled with love....pure art here...
"cruel undertones
dark clouds
that glimmer
in sunlight
*
whispering my sadness
carried away on the breeze
to your listening ears
you are the thunder
that quiets my demons"
I love the both of you so very much...
xoxoxo Taryn xoxo
"cruel undertones
dark clouds
that glimmer
in sunlight
*
whispering my sadness
carried away on the breeze
to your listening ears
you are the thunder
that quiets my demons"
I love the both of you so very much...
xoxoxo Taryn xoxo

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26th Aug 2016 2:14pm
thank you from us both my beautiful one I cherish you :)
I love you so much..
xo Brenda
I love you so much..
xo Brenda
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2016 2:46am
I have flat-lined because of you two!
...my heart is filled with a want of
something like this.
Love you guys!
...my heart is filled with a want of
something like this.
Love you guys!

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26th Aug 2016 2:15pm
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26th Aug 2016 9:22pm
I had such a clear picture in my head and felt both sides on this. They shared the same flow but carried their own voices. Was truly a pleasure.
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27th Aug 2016 00:53am
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2016 00:48am
My god dear, this is the one to learn by.. Thank you B
Trish
Trish

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