~masochist's kiss~

that's what love is, it comes at you sideways.
we stand & fight, Crim, trying to find value
among all the cigarette butts...

that we do thank you John..

love Crim

Brenda
 Love takes on it own
form for each of us. Some tastes
we acquire and others are just
natural...
I love the ending

"shaken covered in the ashes
of what could be

*

~burned to the ground with what is~"

I think brilliant

Keith

so very true thank you Keith..

xo Brenda

thank you Gioele it's the love of a Sadist.. welcome to du..

love Crim

This whole poem was a masterpiece. So beautifully written! Every word fit perfectly with the one before it. It was creative, it was  raw, it was touching. There's a flood of emotions running through me right now. This is by far one of the most best poems I have ever read. It stimulates my mind in just the right way. Great poem thank you for sharing it!

thank you most graciously you are so very kind to say so.. you moved me deeply with your very generous comment.. putting a smile on my face this morning :)

love Brenda

There is beauty within these lines, although most
would say there isn't. But to be treated in such a
brutal way is both a joy to the giver and the one
who is treated in such a way . . . there is satisfaction..

thank you Jerry for understanding I take pleasure in those that cut my heart.. it's masochistic I know but it's the truth.. I deeply appreciate you for seeing the beauty in this write and kind of relationship..

love Brenda

So intensely raw.
It made my heart ache for you.
A love like this...is all consuming.
Regardless of its toxic nature. You hate to love it as you do, but can't imagine yourself without it.

You captured the depth of emotions perfectly.

No one can deliver as you can, my dear Crim 💓

Truly brilliant.

thank you lovely Heart words can be cruel yet inevitably I find myself drawn to the hard ones.. overly kind and I get nervous..  
 
love Crim

Ah, Love!. . .Such a dreadful, dreadful thing. . .but this here poem, my Queen, is genuine and heartfelt. . .my heart wept in silence. . .love to you. . .~Devlin.

thank you my beautiful Dark Queen though it was only words the left hook only a metaphor.. though I must be masochistic because inevitably I will come back for more with this person..

love you lady..

xo Brenda

Whoa!   This is too sexy.  Passion is an abusive master.  

The DA should issue an arrest warrant for crimsin for writing honest erotica.

thank you Snuggle though it was only a tongue lashing though it did indeed cut.. though I'm drawn to this so appreciate you finding the appeal in this :)

love Crim

Perfectly described. .loved it Maestro.
Love Trish

thank you beautiful Trish..

love Brenda

Powerful writing Crim!   ...and so sad as well.  Those intense emotions that you tap into are what make you such a great poet!  You definitely made me feel this one!  Xx-sara

thank you lovely Sara for feeling me on this write..

love Brenda

Love is love in darkness and light 😁😈
Great read 😎

thank you graciously DC :)

love Crim

I learn from you Crim.  Ecstasy may well be possible even in the midst of what many would call degradation.  You're a fearless writer, and "masochist's kiss" is shocking (to many) but remains a love poem, albeit painful.  Brilliant work!

thank you Sir Crow I'm a true masochist at heart I love the ones that burn..

love Crim

Fight for what und who you love protect them with your life

thank you Kavik warrior soul I will..

love Brenda

"tasting my masochistic nature  
knowing i'll come for you  
on my knees crawling  
always cumming back for more" > brilliant wording, Crim! Just brilliant!!!

As a fellow masochist I could really feel this one, made me think of 'Do I Wanna Know' from Arctic Monkeys...

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende so happy you as a sister masochist you felt this write :)

love Crim

Brenda.. raw and powerful.. as always you kicked ass.. love you..




Dave

thank you Dave love you my friend..

xo Brenda

yes & please & thank you :)
hardwired to like it harder
loved this, beautiful one
xoxox

thank you beautiful Katja love you lady :)

xo Brenda

How much a painful cycle this is.  In just an I stant I felt I saw the history of the fight, the bruising, and the sad reconciliation.  And more tragic, the inevitable knowledge that it will come again.

I feel bad I got too extreme with metaphors it was a only a severe tongue lashing but being masochistic I know I will be back for more thank you for your kind thoughts..

love Crim

Human behavior over love/lust/attachment/addiction is such a peculiar thing. You have a very fascinating, and provocative writing style. Nice ink!

thank you most graciously and I appreciate the follow :)

love Crim

Saw one of your forum posts recently, so i had to stop by and check out more of your intense writing.

aw that's way cool i'll have to check you out as well..

love Crim