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Of Great Disgust
What has become of me?
A once vibrant soul of innocence
Now a dilapidated bacterial breeding ground
A safe space of endless futility
Such are wasted seeds
I'm full of doubt and rot
Sovern germs adore my eyes
Men of respect abhor me
Moreover I am folklore
The twelve-legged creature
A squid that fell into a spider
Then put into a meat grinder
What has become of me?
The wicked lust machine
I'm coming clean, I'm coming clean
With a loud pop
And a dead dream.
A once vibrant soul of innocence
Now a dilapidated bacterial breeding ground
A safe space of endless futility
Such are wasted seeds
I'm full of doubt and rot
Sovern germs adore my eyes
Men of respect abhor me
Moreover I am folklore
The twelve-legged creature
A squid that fell into a spider
Then put into a meat grinder
What has become of me?
The wicked lust machine
I'm coming clean, I'm coming clean
With a loud pop
And a dead dream.
Published 19th Aug 2016
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 2:24pm
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20th Aug 2016 5:53am
Wow, that's some high praise! I am glad you liked and connected with it! Thanks for reading.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 3:24pm
The man in the mirror...no better truth than that Anon, good observational piece.
Btw, on a side note, you are light years ahead from your generation, always in depth and truthful with your pen.
Btw, on a side note, you are light years ahead from your generation, always in depth and truthful with your pen.
20th Aug 2016 6:07am
Indeed, the only person we can truly change is the one that looks us back in the mirror.
Thank you for saying that, it truly means a lot coming from you. Your writings have inspired a lot of changes and tweaks of my writing, I've always admired the honesty and profound images you portray. Thank you very much for reading my work Vee, I greatly appreciate the feedback.
~anonshadow😏
Thank you for saying that, it truly means a lot coming from you. Your writings have inspired a lot of changes and tweaks of my writing, I've always admired the honesty and profound images you portray. Thank you very much for reading my work Vee, I greatly appreciate the feedback.
~anonshadow😏
