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Inamorata
‘She was a thief and a whore and a kept woman.’ Sandburg
I chase a dream & trouble follows
I drive a highway lost in hell
a woman snares me in her spell
my hardest kiss, she swallows
she writes her heart on the wind that blows
the stars are killed, the moon’s accused
a lover’s flesh must be abused
the storm ungently goes
a whore is meant to be degraded
we sing praetorian songs of hedon
and dance savannahs tramped in Eden
a harlot, raped & humiliated
orgasms like bullets in a bandoleer
her amorous tongue is a blasphemy
I give the torment she begs of me
and steal every tear
enslave my lust & crave my bite
stay with me thru the storms ahead
lay with me in a wailing bed
where I sleep at night…
(Artist unknown)
Published 15th Aug 2016
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15th Aug 2016 11:03pm
'she writes her heart on the wind that blows
the stars are killed, the moon’s accused
a lover’s flesh must be abused
the storm ungently goes '
I shed a tear for her,for she is tragically beautiful. A fine work of art.....
the stars are killed, the moon’s accused
a lover’s flesh must be abused
the storm ungently goes '
I shed a tear for her,for she is tragically beautiful. A fine work of art.....
16th Aug 2016 3:21am
absolutely love this wonderfully crafted ink!!!
Fav Line
"lay with me in a wailing bed
where I sleep at night" that line just lingers..haughting!!
Fav Line
"lay with me in a wailing bed
where I sleep at night" that line just lingers..haughting!!
16th Aug 2016 4:16am
16th Aug 2016 8:04am
Anonymous
16th Aug 2016 8:13am
How do you make me
churn with grace?
youre owning my words as
always.
Sir, darling, babe
churn with grace?
youre owning my words as
always.
Sir, darling, babe
16th Aug 2016 10:54am
John the tempest and Dominate nature of this write has me utterly seduced as always..
love Crim
love Crim
16th Aug 2016 9:10pm
This woman can be trouble but you catch her well. I like the structure and rhyme scheme, neither of which are forced or disruptive of what you're trying to say. Wish I could manage that with some consistency.
18th Aug 2016 9:42pm
25th Aug 2016 4:12am
Clever, powerful writing that pulls the reader along quickly. 'orgasms like bullets in a bandoleer' great line. The rhyme scheme works perfectly with the tone of the piece.
