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Hell's Nymph
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you stole my breath
while exhaling a hiss
placing it in a vial
stealing my incantation
before it could escape my lips
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your gothic whore
lying prostrate chained to your throne
the love spell I imagined for you
cast over my soul
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crawling over the bleached bones of lovers past
and the wreckage you've left
you call me out of the shadows
commanding my demons obey you
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whispering curses you've enslaved me
on the slate slab of destruction
I lie open and splayed
blackened semen running down my legs
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visions of the spires of Hades
searing my mind with it's greatness
locked in this flesh I'm fettered and weak
I will be transformed into Satan's most vile desire
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see me corrupted
wearing a black wedding dress
I walk down the aisle of damnation
in hell you will steal my soul's innocence
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Lucifer awaits patiently biding his time
being groomed for his hellish delights
a sex slave for all eternity
as the seraphim weep
Published 14th Aug 2016
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2016 5:29am
Brenda.. a very classic old school write.. meaning simply, you can still go dark.. it's like riding a bike, you never forget.. but the honesty, is still the strength.. brilliant write.. love you..
Dave
Dave
14th Aug 2016 10:44am
14th Aug 2016 5:48am
it's as if your quill is dipped in Stygian waters and casts this masterful gothic write upon weathered pages destined for libraries long lost to the ravages of time
14th Aug 2016 10:45am
thank you graciously Darkest Lord Hades for a more beautifully poetic comment I couldn't hope to receive..
love Crim
love Crim
14th Aug 2016 5:51am
Gothic romance, Crim, mystical & elegant;
& the black veil bride is perversely glamorous...
& the black veil bride is perversely glamorous...
14th Aug 2016 10:46am
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14th Aug 2016 11:56am
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14th Aug 2016 3:11pm
Anonymous
14th Aug 2016 1:54pm
Very passionate dark write..
Absolutely love this Crim!
Brilliant ink...
Absolutely love this Crim!
Brilliant ink...
14th Aug 2016 3:11pm
14th Aug 2016 2:38pm
You paint a very vivid picture here that manages to touch beautiful and dark perfectly with one hand, fingers splayed almost lovingly to cover both.
14th Aug 2016 3:12pm
14th Aug 2016 3:28pm
When the rip tide of emotions urge you on, Brenda, you answer that call as only "you" are capable of answering it. With fearless abandon and, as the saying goes, "you let it all hang out." I quite understand. Been there myself many times. Each self unveiling poem brought me closer and closer to finally riding me of my demons. Fight on, you are winning!
14th Aug 2016 9:01pm
14th Aug 2016 9:37pm
You're demonic side always thrills me Crim. I don't know whether to be terrified or turned on. Maybe both....
"whispering curses you've enslaved me
on the slate slab of destruction
I lie open and splayed
blackened semen running down my legs"
That last image is going to stick around for a while. This nymph clearly needs a firm hand! Loved this Lady Crim!
"whispering curses you've enslaved me
on the slate slab of destruction
I lie open and splayed
blackened semen running down my legs"
That last image is going to stick around for a while. This nymph clearly needs a firm hand! Loved this Lady Crim!
15th Aug 2016 1:34am
15th Aug 2016 1:11am
I love that through your transition you have retained your dark portion of writing. It's like a black swanesque talent, Brenda. You dance on both stages.
15th Aug 2016 1:35am
thank you Sage one for embracing all of me and for such a stunningly beautiful comment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
15th Aug 2016 1:50pm
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