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Senses
I smell him.
Everywhere.
He consumes me.
Hands wrap around my waist and I feel him.
Every inch of skin to skin contact is like fire in my veins.
The silence goes on for moments.
He leans in to my neck and whispers “Breathe”
His voice an echo in my head.
The darkness prolongs my anticipation.
I reach for the blindfold and he swats my behind.
“Patience” he whispers, inches from my face now.
Strawberries. Somewhere in the room.
He runs one along my bottom lip.
“Bite” I do. Sweet.
Covered in chocolate.
He kisses me. Once. Twice.
I’m waiting.
But he's gone.
Everywhere.
He consumes me.
Hands wrap around my waist and I feel him.
Every inch of skin to skin contact is like fire in my veins.
The silence goes on for moments.
He leans in to my neck and whispers “Breathe”
His voice an echo in my head.
The darkness prolongs my anticipation.
I reach for the blindfold and he swats my behind.
“Patience” he whispers, inches from my face now.
Strawberries. Somewhere in the room.
He runs one along my bottom lip.
“Bite” I do. Sweet.
Covered in chocolate.
He kisses me. Once. Twice.
I’m waiting.
But he's gone.
Published 11th Aug 2016
| Edited 14th Aug 2016
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11th Aug 2016 00:34am
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4th Sep 2016 6:47pm
Interesting...such a torture to be left wanting...desire built by anticipation....nothing.
I am hoping it was the beginning
and he returned to put out your fire.
Keith
I am hoping it was the beginning
and he returned to put out your fire.
Keith
5th Sep 2016 5:03am
I'm working on making this into something else but my muse isn't cooperating.
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I'm in love with your poetry so the fact that you even read mine made my day!
Thanks so much for the comment!
I'm in love with your poetry so the fact that you even read mine made my day!
