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mujer que llora
small town woman. woman of the woods.
coyote hunter. witch of moonstruck nights.
why do you want me, she says.
I have not travelled. I have not fornicated
with a squadron of men.
I have been touched by my own hands
more than any lover.
where I have battled, I have learned
a man doesn’t get far without food, without rest;
without a woman.
when it storms outside your door,
I’ll take you there, naked in the rain
as wet pellets carve primitive runes in our tender hides.
lightning afires our vision; thunder rages in our hearts.
I kneel & suck the rain where it blends with
your cranny’s creaming droplets, at the juncture of your legs.
if you run away, I will chase you across three rocks;
the ancient spirits will guide me.
we will eat the things we kill
and sleep below the stars.
I will kiss the scars hidden in your flesh
and the long scar under your belly
where they cut you & pulled out two screaming daughters.
beguiled by the sullen melody of your guitar
I will entangle myself in your hair
and gasp for air in the cinereal waters of your eyes,
but I will not –
I will not love you…
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Published 9th Aug 2016
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9th Aug 2016 8:01pm
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9th Aug 2016 11:09pm
beguiled by the sullen melody of your guitar
I will entangle myself in your hair
and gasp for air in the cinereal waters of your eyes,
but I will not –
I will not love you…
As always, captivating words highlighted by the perfect picture.
I will entangle myself in your hair
and gasp for air in the cinereal waters of your eyes,
but I will not –
I will not love you…
As always, captivating words highlighted by the perfect picture.
10th Aug 2016 1:52am
This was simply,breathtaking
A passionately profound love story, adorned with the photo of a beautiful barefooted woman.......
A passionately profound love story, adorned with the photo of a beautiful barefooted woman.......
10th Aug 2016 2:55am
10th Aug 2016 2:10pm
10th Aug 2016 3:11pm
if you run away, I will chase you across three rocks;
the ancient spirits will guide me.
we will eat the things we kill
and sleep below the stars.
You can run from Love but you cannot hide from it
even in the profession that you won't.
the ancient spirits will guide me.
we will eat the things we kill
and sleep below the stars.
You can run from Love but you cannot hide from it
even in the profession that you won't.
11th Aug 2016 2:36am
Absolutely breathtaking..JohnFeddeler...thinking I need to make room for this one .. I am always in awe of your pen ...
11th Aug 2016 4:53pm
An exhilarating romance with a small town woman.
"beguiled by the sullen melody of your guitar
I will entangle myself in your hair
and gasp for air in the cinereal waters of your eyes,
but I will not –
I will not love you…"
Sounds like denial to me. The crying woman has you heart, body and soul. Beguiling work...
"beguiled by the sullen melody of your guitar
I will entangle myself in your hair
and gasp for air in the cinereal waters of your eyes,
but I will not –
I will not love you…"
Sounds like denial to me. The crying woman has you heart, body and soul. Beguiling work...
16th Aug 2016 7:42am
18th Aug 2016 2:28pm
