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Smile
I want to touch you
In such a way
So that every other man
Can see my fingerprints
Upon your smile
Published 5th Aug 2016
| Edited 6th Aug 2016
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5th Aug 2016 5:43pm
Very short. Very sweet. VERY short, as I said,
but it said what a thousand words could not.
but it said what a thousand words could not.
5th Aug 2016 6:41pm
5th Aug 2016 8:41pm
5th Aug 2016 8:52pm
This is a portion of contentment
in a bite siz'd morsel..for the
whole .
how beautiful,
-Howlings
in a bite siz'd morsel..for the
whole .
how beautiful,
-Howlings
5th Aug 2016 9:40pm
6th Aug 2016 2:43am
Anonymous
6th Aug 2016 3:10am
Wow Naajir.......short.....sweet & sexy......brilliant write.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Aug 2016 9:31pm
The look of love is unmistakably
evident in the lover's smile.
Great ink, Naajir.
evident in the lover's smile.
Great ink, Naajir.
7th Aug 2016 1:10pm
7th Aug 2016 4:33pm
Anonymous
25th Aug 2016 5:31pm
Fair steals the breath, this does. There's that momentary internal gasp and then a slow building smile. Very nice! :)
