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song of the forest
with chorus from the birds
and score from the streams
a song without any words
the forest it does sing
when you enter this realm
leave your pains behind
with nature at the helm
true peace you will find
lichen moss and fungi
they lighten up the bush
every breath a new high
the forest's truly cush
if this is not enchantment
then I don't know what is
it's everyone's attachment
to the mom that nature is!
© KDAmB 2016. All Rights Reserved
Published 5th Aug 2016
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5th Aug 2016 2:40pm
aw KDAmB I love the forests they are our hearts home..
this sings with such beauty and majesty :)
love Brenda
this sings with such beauty and majesty :)
love Brenda
well...Brenda..just read your latest after posting this... you wrote what i was feeling..wanted to post this last night..but decided against it...this one's ain't nothing compared to your magical piece..thanks for your high praise friend!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
5th Aug 2016 2:44pm
I read this quite beautiful poem three times.
Three times I was given inner peach.
Thank you.
Three times I was given inner peach.
Thank you.
5th Aug 2016 2:48pm
No Jerry I thank You Sir! am humbled by your kind words..just wanted to convey what i feel when I go bushwalking...yes you said it right Sir we find solace there...
5th Aug 2016 2:56pm
5th Aug 2016 3:01pm
Thank you Willows for seeing what i meant..yes we all need it..all the time...appreciate your visit and true words my friend!
Cheers!
Cheers!
Anonymous
5th Aug 2016 3:13pm
Such a lovely write. 💓
Beautiful imagery, and very comforting.
Beautiful imagery, and very comforting.
5th Aug 2016 3:22pm
Thank You Dear friend! your visit and appreciation are valued immensely!
Cheers!
Cheers!
5th Aug 2016 3:42pm
What a breath of fresh air... I think I will take a trip to the mountains this weekend! Loved this!
5th Aug 2016 3:47pm
the sooner you do the better Sara! nothing recharges your soul better than a trip to the bush.. I welcome your visiting with me and kind words. Am glad you liked it!! Thank You !!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
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5th Aug 2016 4:48pm
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5th Aug 2016 4:55pm
what a surprise...although the Omen were not good...I did find Nemo... right here!
I welcome your visit and kind words of appreciation bro...Thank you so much!! why can't you visit matey? just curious...
I welcome your visit and kind words of appreciation bro...Thank you so much!! why can't you visit matey? just curious...
Anonymous
5th Aug 2016 4:58pm
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c'mon matey...your remind me of one of Kurt Russel's action movies...where his hologram comes and fights..forgot the name...kinda similar to one of those Mad Max types...
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5th Aug 2016 5:27pm
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5th Aug 2016 6:43pm
5th Aug 2016 9:23pm
Your voice is so calming here
.. .a gentle but wise continuum.
I adore .
-Howlings
.. .a gentle but wise continuum.
I adore .
-Howlings
5th Aug 2016 10:16pm
And I adore your kind words of appreciation and insight!! Thank You MsWhelms.. Your presence always fills my heart with joy! Always welcome here!
6th Aug 2016 5:09am
6th Aug 2016 9:31am
Welcome John! Thank You ! am glad you saw the colors and melody in this...praise from you is praise indeed!
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
6th Aug 2016 2:18pm
6th Aug 2016 2:57pm
Welcome Kate! if a poet like you says so..then it's truly humbling. Am glad you saw the beauty ....Thank You so much!!
11th Sep 2016 5:44pm
Such a beautiful Ode to Nature ♥
Love the forest, the trees, the enchantment in this piece (that word came to mind even before I've read it in the last stanza)
Thank you for making my heart sing :-)
Love the forest, the trees, the enchantment in this piece (that word came to mind even before I've read it in the last stanza)
Thank you for making my heart sing :-)
11th Sep 2016 6:36pm
My belief is when you are dealing with something beautiful the resultant conversation would invariably be beautiful as well... all I did was write what I saw, how I saw... another example would be of poetry about a mother's love... no matter the word choice/form the poem is guaranteed to be beautiful same with mother nature.. I appreciate sincerely your kind gesture and appreciation. Am glad you liked it.
Thank you so much!
KDAmB
Thank you so much!
KDAmB
