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Ventilator
Gasping for air
Struggling to sift
Life and death
What is safe
What is not
This is the life of the vent:
There is dust
And grime
And shit
the vent sucks all
this in and eventually
When there is too much
You make the call.
Struggling to sift
Life and death
What is safe
What is not
This is the life of the vent:
There is dust
And grime
And shit
the vent sucks all
this in and eventually
When there is too much
You make the call.
Published 4th Aug 2016
| Edited 5th Aug 2016
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4th Aug 2016 5:50pm
4th Aug 2016 8:01pm
The inherent sadness sticks in your lungs on this one. Wonderful imagery
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4th Aug 2016 8:13pm
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4th Aug 2016 11:55pm
This is too close to home for me. I hope no family will ever have to face it. There are no words I can offer for comfort except to say, i hope you have the much needed family and friends' support.
