deepundergroundpoetry.com
See You Later….
I loved him
More than words could express
I loved him
Deeper than the Pacific Ocean
I loved him
Where logic and reason made no sense
He was that which I never had
Never allowed myself to have
Never allowed myself to feel
But basked in it all once I did
He got past walls
Without even trying
Mask dropped off in his presence
The well within me would open up
And out pours all I kept hidden
He Tap danced with my heart
& the music we made was beautiful
He was that which soothed my spirit
Brought smiles with just the mention of his name
He was dreams
I wanted to watch unfold
He was a broken vessel
I thought I could heal
He was my fairy tale prince
He just didn’t have a clue
How deep my love ran for him
The Yang to my Yin
He was….
Perhaps in another life
My soul mate
The left to my right
The up to my down
The beat to my music
The unbalance separate
That became balance together
We were the two halves
I truly believed would become whole
It’s hard to let go of
Something you deemed so beautiful
Something you felt was right
A love you just knew
Would heal the parts of you hidden
From wounds deeply buried
It’s so hard to let go
Of something
You went to bed dreaming about
But in the end
All things don’t come together
And endings are not always perfect
And sometimes you have to lose to win
Sometimes two ships
Have no choice
But to pass each other by
In order to save itself
From crashing head on
There are never goodbyes
Only I’ll see you later
So my love
I’ll see you later
All rights reserved to BSavvy 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 13
reading list entries 0
comments 25
reads 882
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re. See You Later….
Anonymous
4th Aug 2016 5:42pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. See You Later….
4th Aug 2016 5:46pm
*Hugs right back* Thank you Elario, I appreciate you stopping by and showing love....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. See You Later….
Anonymous
4th Aug 2016 6:11pm
<< post removed >>
Re. See You Later….
4th Aug 2016 6:50pm
Re: Re. See You Later….
4th Aug 2016 6:53pm
Re. See You Later….
4th Aug 2016 8:47pm
Re: Re. See You Later….
4th Aug 2016 8:52pm
Re. See You Later….
4th Aug 2016 8:55pm
Re: Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:17pm
Re. See You Later….
4th Aug 2016 10:46pm
This was a very sad write, BSavvy. Even though it was sad
you wrote the poem in a kind of lighthearted way. But inside
I know your heart was aching as you led us (your readers) to
the ultimate conclusion. Very well done. You shared your pain.
Thank you.
you wrote the poem in a kind of lighthearted way. But inside
I know your heart was aching as you led us (your readers) to
the ultimate conclusion. Very well done. You shared your pain.
Thank you.
1
Re: Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:18pm
Thank you hun... sometimes the best way to release the pain is through writing... Let the pen cry those tears for you..... Glad you were able to feel the emotions in this piece... Thank you hun for stopping by and showing love...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. See You Later….
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Aug 2016 2:19am
5th Aug 2016 2:18am
My heart is beating out of my chest reading this piece.
....how so many of your words resonate so deeply within.
"I loved him
Where logic and reason made no sense
He was that which I never had
Never allowed myself to have
Never allowed myself to feel
But basked in it all once I did
He got past walls
Without even trying
Mask dropped off in his presence
The well within me would open up
And out pours all I kept hidden "
Logic doesn't exist ..in something which is so deep.
When your feel...overpowers your thoughts, it is something in which to behold.
I adore this piece. It brought tears to my eyes.
Such a heartfelt...passionate ink. 💓
....how so many of your words resonate so deeply within.
"I loved him
Where logic and reason made no sense
He was that which I never had
Never allowed myself to have
Never allowed myself to feel
But basked in it all once I did
He got past walls
Without even trying
Mask dropped off in his presence
The well within me would open up
And out pours all I kept hidden "
Logic doesn't exist ..in something which is so deep.
When your feel...overpowers your thoughts, it is something in which to behold.
I adore this piece. It brought tears to my eyes.
Such a heartfelt...passionate ink. 💓
2
Re: Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:46pm
Logic and reasoning is one of my favorite lines because it is so true when emotions take over you lose all sense of logic and reasoning.... Ugh!!! The heart when following it at times can suck in the end if you end up hurt. Sorry didn't meant to bring tears to your eyes but I must admit when I read it over it brought tears to my eyes, I just didn't allow them to fall lol.... Thank you hun for stopping by and showing love....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re: Re. See You Later….
Anonymous
5th Aug 2016 10:22pm
Yes. I agree wholeheartedly with your words. 💓
...sometimes, a good cry is needed.
Thank you.
...sometimes, a good cry is needed.
Thank you.
1
Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 3:28am
This vibe is so full yearning..
Yet so full of hope for the future..
"Sometimes two ships
Have no choice
But to pass each other by
In order to save itself
From crashing head on
There are never goodbyes
Only I’ll see you later"
...now that's rich in sentiment..
You sure tug on them strings don't you?..
Yet so full of hope for the future..
"Sometimes two ships
Have no choice
But to pass each other by
In order to save itself
From crashing head on
There are never goodbyes
Only I’ll see you later"
...now that's rich in sentiment..
You sure tug on them strings don't you?..
1
Re: Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:47pm
Yes my dear Naajir... it is filled with yearning and a slight hope for the future, but a sadness of the reality that there might not be one.... haha!!! You know that is my forte' emotional pieces that pull on the heart strings..... Thank you hun for commenting and reading..
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 8:24pm
I feel every gritty grain and
savored memory of hoping
to get it right within this
masterpiece. .
Beautifully eerie my honey.. .
-Howlings
savored memory of hoping
to get it right within this
masterpiece. .
Beautifully eerie my honey.. .
-Howlings
1
Re: Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:49pm
Thank you my honey.... Yes hoping to get it right is right lol.... *smooches*
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 8:30pm
"Sometimes two ships
Have no choice
But to pass each other by
In order to save itself
From crashing head on
There are never goodbyes
Only I’ll see you later"
lovely Savvy one this hit my heart hard for the aching wisdom of it..
such a painfully beautiful and elegant a write..
love Crim
Have no choice
But to pass each other by
In order to save itself
From crashing head on
There are never goodbyes
Only I’ll see you later"
lovely Savvy one this hit my heart hard for the aching wisdom of it..
such a painfully beautiful and elegant a write..
love Crim
1
Re: Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:50pm
Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:30pm
to read this is to recollect that moment when love was lost - so mournful all the more so for the brave face worn
1
Re: Re. See You Later….
5th Aug 2016 9:52pm
Brave face worn, yes indeed.... Sometimes you hide that pain that you feel and put on your brave face but inside you are really falling apart... To love and lose love can be a painfully beautiful experience haha!!!! Thank you Whale for stopping by and showing love....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
18th Aug 2016 6:59pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. See You Later….
18th Aug 2016 9:15pm
Why thank you kind sir, I really appreciate your comment... Glad you enjoyed this piece. This is one of my faves for many reasons.... Blessings.
~BSavvy
~BSavvy