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and if it's almost over...
an old man shouts at
the passing crowds
that the end is coming...
and a small child looks
at his mother and says
but surely it's going..?
Published 2nd Aug 2016
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2nd Aug 2016 11:09pm
2nd Aug 2016 11:19pm
2nd Aug 2016 11:55pm
Like the end of a train... always going and never coming. That's one clever kid and sure to be a misfit in this world...
3rd Aug 2016 00:37am
3rd Aug 2016 11:29am
3rd Aug 2016 3:09am
3rd Aug 2016 3:30pm
The contrast of expansion and retraction in such
a small amount of words is no less than brilliant, Paul.
As children our world gets bigger and bigger;
As we age it becomes smaller and smaller...
a small amount of words is no less than brilliant, Paul.
As children our world gets bigger and bigger;
As we age it becomes smaller and smaller...
