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Word of Mouth
My heart is burning
and my tongue is on fire
My mouth has become
a hotspring allowing
my words to blow
Slowly tearing you apart
shattering your world
Time ran out
and the love song became hate
The dirty talk vanished into
the sound of madness
I've healed the wounds
and I'm on my way
and my tongue is on fire
My mouth has become
a hotspring allowing
my words to blow
Slowly tearing you apart
shattering your world
Time ran out
and the love song became hate
The dirty talk vanished into
the sound of madness
I've healed the wounds
and I'm on my way
Published 30th Jul 2016
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30th Jul 2016 2:26pm
31st Jul 2016 2:34am
30th Jul 2016 3:01pm
Fucking love this.
Feel it too, when people you trusted start to suck, it's time to cut out the cancer and move on
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Feel it too, when people you trusted start to suck, it's time to cut out the cancer and move on
Big Like
31st Jul 2016 2:35am
30th Jul 2016 5:54pm
31st Jul 2016 2:36am
30th Jul 2016 10:06pm
Tommie, you speak some awesome truths in this piece. Reality check! Brava ma amie!
31st Jul 2016 2:37am
2nd Aug 2016 3:22pm
Excellent piece. So glad you managed to get this person out of your life and clear your head. I especially liked the dirty talk changing into the sounds of madness. Gorgeously put.
3rd Aug 2016 00:17am
3rd Aug 2016 6:55am
happy trails, Tommie!
great poem, & I like my love songs
with a little dirty talk in them...
great poem, & I like my love songs
with a little dirty talk in them...
