Haiku: threads

Dean a beautiful Haiku pulling the strings of my heart :)

love Crim

hey Crim, your comments pull the strings of my ego, lol, thanx for. stopping by my lounge...

oooh i agree with lady crimsin
this is a very clever little-big write
loved it
xo

yeah I'm just realizing the atomic power of the Haiku, thanx my page is always brightened by shadoe...

;)..... clever gem, handsome...

hey rain, always a pleasure to have u in the lounge, and see I told them to move the workout equipment and treadmills out before people confused this with a gem,lol...

Dean, this is wonderfully crafted romantic little gem.  I hope we see more Senryu from you...:)

lol, senryu? I that what I was doing? i'll have to Google it, and you will see more of whatever I'm attempting to do, I value your comments and your visits illume the lounge Vee...

Words well stitched
Fine threads

I am honored and humbled by the visit from master weaver whale, thanx brother, I just try to do, what I can do, when I can do it...

Using just 13 words, you've cleverly brought about a rather complex situation. The woman, (I'm assuming of the narrator's dreams), is the owner of his heart. She's "unstitching the thread" to his heart, something that I assume hasn't been done before. "And she kept ahead", meaning that the woman is bent on having the narrator all to herself, whether he likes it or not. She's a woman who holds power and influence over him, both emotionally and physically as suggested by "the bed".

Well done!