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Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
Went to my cousin's house
to see him
After his one year tour was over
Spring of 1966
He went over as an officer
Having completed college and ROTC
My family and his, in the living room
Watching slides and having coffee and cake
Kind of like a travel log of a distant world
People, customs, villages and soldiers
Seemed kinda benign, not so bad
Till the whammo, right in our face
Dead bodies, napalm babies, carnage
We all let out a gasp, our suburban world crashing
My cousin said he didn't know those slides were in there
But he didn't apologize, how do you excuse war ?
That night left an indelible mark
I think he wanted us to witness horror
Wars are messy, life is cheap for the repressed
My young teenage eyes, stained and opened
to see him
After his one year tour was over
Spring of 1966
He went over as an officer
Having completed college and ROTC
My family and his, in the living room
Watching slides and having coffee and cake
Kind of like a travel log of a distant world
People, customs, villages and soldiers
Seemed kinda benign, not so bad
Till the whammo, right in our face
Dead bodies, napalm babies, carnage
We all let out a gasp, our suburban world crashing
My cousin said he didn't know those slides were in there
But he didn't apologize, how do you excuse war ?
That night left an indelible mark
I think he wanted us to witness horror
Wars are messy, life is cheap for the repressed
My young teenage eyes, stained and opened
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Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
24th Jul 2016 1:55am
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
24th Jul 2016 3:24am
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
24th Jul 2016 12:38pm
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
24th Jul 2016 1:31pm
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
25th Jul 2016 2:15am
such a beautifully written piece - a very sobering family get together, one that maybe every family should get - maybe make us more reluctant to go to war ?
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
25th Jul 2016 3:51am
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
Anonymous
25th Jul 2016 4:02am
Wow honey, this is mind boggling.
I could understand the stains
left.my goodness.
I could understand the stains
left.my goodness.

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Re: Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
25th Jul 2016 11:41am
Re: Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
Anonymous
25th Jul 2016 11:44am
Touching and a traumatic thing,
can only imagine babe
can only imagine babe

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Re: Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
25th Jul 2016 1:14pm
50 years later I remember this night as if it were yesterday ....
Thx for reading
Thx for reading
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
25th Jul 2016 11:12am
Re: Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
25th Jul 2016 11:42am
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
26th Jul 2016 1:39am
i have several friends that are Vietnam veterans...and whew...they went through a LOT...your poem is a great tribute about the pain that they had but many never talked about....thank you
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Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
26th Jul 2016 2:30am
Thx Scorpio
Seeing this cousin this weekend, might just read this to him ....
Seeing this cousin this weekend, might just read this to him ....
Re: Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
26th Jul 2016 9:06pm
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
26th Jul 2016 9:45pm
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
28th Jul 2016 6:56am
The hidden painful world of the Vietnam Vets! People don't realize what they really went through! Enjoyed the write.
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28th Jul 2016 12:19pm
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10th Aug 2016 5:46pm
Re. Coffee and Cake, Vietnam, 1966
10th Aug 2016 8:04pm