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My Last Write
My Last Write
I was an emotional mess
Who could care much less
They stare at me with cruel eyes
All the nice comments they said were lies
I thought to myself what if I hang
Or what If I go out with a bang
As I take one more deep breath
I slowly prepare for sweet death
I thought of how I tried to hide
But instead ended it with suicide
No one could be my friend
In the end..
Published 23rd Jul 2016
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24th Jul 2016 2:33am
Damn countrygirl. I have been there. I hope you found some peace writing this.. For me, I have to remember everything is temporary. Pain and pleasure never last. I think that life is tragically beautiful.. I hope you can find moments of peace that make life more worth living. The valleys make the mountains seem so much higher. Hang in there! <3
24th Jul 2016 2:34am
For what it is worth, I will be your friend. Message me about anything, anytime.
24th Jul 2016 3:34am
Thank you so much. I'm better now since I found my boyfriend but still have struggles
24th Jul 2016 3:35am
24th Jul 2016 4:52am
