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When we met

bye gentlegirl

I met you when so young
only girl of 18 and few
so wonderful was your nature
breathtakingly honest and new

So fresh as naive boy i heard
though you 3 years more than I
I started loving you then
before we said goodbye

Weeks went by we talked
such sweetness from your voice
felt only through your fingers
the words of your choice

You were so lonely as me
we exchanged friendship talk
of your life there mine here
through the rain we walk

So gentle man i learned
and oh i felt at ease
wanting to touch you
please love me please
Written by gentlegirl
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