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SPRING
Believers feed religions
Rivers feed the Sea
Who made the well
Spring
To an uncivil war
In Mars manic month
Desolate of decency
Attacked by the broken glass underfoot
Better sit still sun on back
As the ants till and mill
Crawling from a crack
Than to destroy ourselves
Better to sacrifice
To ourselves
ourselves
God does not
Need our faith
To be God
Do you need mine
The old mine leads to the well
And the well spring
Rivers feed the Sea
Who made the well
Spring
To an uncivil war
In Mars manic month
Desolate of decency
Attacked by the broken glass underfoot
Better sit still sun on back
As the ants till and mill
Crawling from a crack
Than to destroy ourselves
Better to sacrifice
To ourselves
ourselves
God does not
Need our faith
To be God
Do you need mine
The old mine leads to the well
And the well spring
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
17th Jul 2016 11:29am
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17th Jul 2016 11:35am
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2016 7:47pm
it feeds the circle, positivity brings positivity, hate begets hate...but it all starts somewhere..within us.
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18th Jul 2016 6:03pm
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2016 9:01pm
Wow Whale.....very thought provoking write......I find your words interesting......brilliant......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. SPRING
19th Jul 2016 8:36pm
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Say it again, please I beggeth
you. So deeply enrobe in power
and strength-
[Better sit still sun on back
As the ants till and mill
Crawling from a crack
Than to destroy ourselves
Better to sacrifice
To ourselves
ourselves
God does not
Need our faith
To be God
Do you need mine
The old mine leads to the well
And the well spring]
you. So deeply enrobe in power
and strength-
[Better sit still sun on back
As the ants till and mill
Crawling from a crack
Than to destroy ourselves
Better to sacrifice
To ourselves
ourselves
God does not
Need our faith
To be God
Do you need mine
The old mine leads to the well
And the well spring]
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19th Jul 2016 8:38pm
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19th Jul 2016 9:12pm
Re. SPRING
19th Jul 2016 11:46pm
this gives an unexpected impression of faith;
do I need to believe that she loves me?
& if I do not, perhaps she loves me anyway...
but your poem is self-sustaining...
do I need to believe that she loves me?
& if I do not, perhaps she loves me anyway...
but your poem is self-sustaining...
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Re. SPRING
21st Jul 2016 9:19pm
Don't think I ever said this to you but, I love the way your mind works, whale. Very intriguing!
Love the potency of this ink....
Love the potency of this ink....
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22nd Jul 2016 7:00pm