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Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
Though he's
never seen,
inhaled,
nor touched
the space
of his desires...
the ache lingers
like a lost memory
while broken smiles fall,
unto the edge of sanity...
n' that 'harrowin' sarcasm'
pierces the heart...
as each gougin' blow
ensures that the end
will prove to be
the only 'real' everlastin'
they've ever hoped
to share...
never seen,
inhaled,
nor touched
the space
of his desires...
the ache lingers
like a lost memory
while broken smiles fall,
unto the edge of sanity...
n' that 'harrowin' sarcasm'
pierces the heart...
as each gougin' blow
ensures that the end
will prove to be
the only 'real' everlastin'
they've ever hoped
to share...
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Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 00:51am
I don't want to say it's beautiful, because it's so sad. But this really is beautiful
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 00:59am
It's ok sweetie I've gotten used to the
suffering... Thank u for ur kindness
suffering... Thank u for ur kindness
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
Anonymous
8th Jul 2016 1:10am
lingered memories loss
so beautiful it's suffer
beautiful ink my friend
Dkruie
so beautiful it's suffer
beautiful ink my friend
Dkruie
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 1:15am
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
Anonymous
8th Jul 2016 1:54am
Poet......this made me emotional......very touching write as your ink always is......luv your avatar.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 11:42am
Hey Purple, you're heart is filled with such sweetness I'm not surprised you were, but I'm grateful as always you shined your light here, n yea my avatar
is of one oft all time fav. Actors, Clint Eastwood! :) appreciate you! :)
is of one oft all time fav. Actors, Clint Eastwood! :) appreciate you! :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 2:36am
Emotional, beautiful and thought provoking are these words PM...how can they not touch the heart of all who read them...
So focused was I on reading them that i accidently picked up a lid that was defrosting and crossed it over my keyboard...I'm hoping the water did not dribble down underneath the keys...
So focused was I on reading them that i accidently picked up a lid that was defrosting and crossed it over my keyboard...I'm hoping the water did not dribble down underneath the keys...
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 11:46am
Aaaawww sweetheart I hope not too! But I can tell you something that may give you hope. (Most) keyboards have
removeable (buttons) keys, so if IF you felt it needed, u can pop them off, towel dry n replace them... :) oh n thank you a ton for your sweet review n support :)
removeable (buttons) keys, so if IF you felt it needed, u can pop them off, towel dry n replace them... :) oh n thank you a ton for your sweet review n support :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
Anonymous
8th Jul 2016 4:40pm
Your words licks against
the soul of my flesh
..suctioning their way through
walls of emotional carcasses
And you find me shivering
beneath
the soul of my flesh
..suctioning their way through
walls of emotional carcasses
And you find me shivering
beneath
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 5:13pm
Damn... I fucking love your comment
lady! :) thank u so much my sweetness :)
lady! :) thank u so much my sweetness :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 5:17pm
aw Poe a very brilliantly aching write..
you've bared soul on page and it is beautiful..
love Crim
you've bared soul on page and it is beautiful..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 5:41pm
Sweet Crim, you're beautiful...
Thank you so much, truly grateful always for your support :)
Thank you so much, truly grateful always for your support :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
Anonymous
8th Jul 2016 5:18pm
Beautifully written, achingly so...impossible, I think, to read without misting up. At least it was for me.
Timid
Timid
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
8th Jul 2016 6:04pm
Aaawwww... C'mere n let me kiss your sweet tears away. Thank you my sweetheart, truly n always appreciate you :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
10th Jul 2016 7:55am
Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
10th Jul 2016 7:59am
Thank you my sweetness, honored
by your RL add n truly appreciate your time n thoughts :)
by your RL add n truly appreciate your time n thoughts :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
10th Jul 2016 9:37pm
You're on the sad side of life, Poe. Another piece that makes me cry. But it is so absolutely beautiful, as previously said ...
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
10th Jul 2016 9:41pm
Yea n to think the solution seems so simple... Just need a like minded woman that wants to be touched...
Thank you sweetheart :)
Thank you sweetheart :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
10th Jul 2016 10:45pm
Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
11th Jul 2016 00:08am
Aaaawwww... There she is! missed hearing from you my dearest! n I thank you completely for your continued support :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
12th Jul 2016 8:40am
ugh i've just read crim's "real man"
& now this... oh lord my little black heart
just shattered
i'm so glad i can blame the tears on hormones
xo
& now this... oh lord my little black heart
just shattered
i'm so glad i can blame the tears on hormones
xo
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
12th Jul 2016 10:22am
Aaawww I'm so happy it's just hormonal lol
thank you my sweetness, I treasure you always! n hope your 'bun' isn't causin you much or any mornin' sickness... :)
thank you my sweetness, I treasure you always! n hope your 'bun' isn't causin you much or any mornin' sickness... :)
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
Anonymous
21st Jul 2016 12:34pm
A painfully beautiful piece. So very heartfelt.
Amazing job.
Amazing job.
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
21st Jul 2016 9:32pm
Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
2nd Aug 2016 10:02pm
I really enjoyed this write. It had a sad intimacy that moved me. *hugs*
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Re: Re. Those 'Pipe Dreams' are only meant for Smokin'
3rd Aug 2016 00:03am
What's funny about this in particular
is the memory of thd event was very sad... but when I decided to write it years later, it was more loving than sad for me... Ain't that SAD?? lol
Thanks bro. Truly, appreciate you :)
is the memory of thd event was very sad... but when I decided to write it years later, it was more loving than sad for me... Ain't that SAD?? lol
Thanks bro. Truly, appreciate you :)