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The (Ly)ing 'King'
*I (tried) n entered in a contest here...I think! Lol*
He ruled...
the King, dumb...
To the rise
of wise words whispered,
formed from the mouths
of 'knew' better babes...
'Children'who knew
not that what
was uttered as truth,
this 'soothsayer'
layered his tongue in lies
he disguised to make wayward
youth follow his lost odyssey...
A prophecy...
SHEEP flock around
the leader...
So don't perpetuate
further false fate
ahead on the road to life...
because a 'Lying King'
can only rule tediously
until the 'Trump Card'
had been exposed...
He ruled...
the King, dumb...
To the rise
of wise words whispered,
formed from the mouths
of 'knew' better babes...
'Children'who knew
not that what
was uttered as truth,
this 'soothsayer'
layered his tongue in lies
he disguised to make wayward
youth follow his lost odyssey...
A prophecy...
SHEEP flock around
the leader...
So don't perpetuate
further false fate
ahead on the road to life...
because a 'Lying King'
can only rule tediously
until the 'Trump Card'
had been exposed...
Published 26th Jun 2016
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26th Jun 2016 5:07pm
steeped in profundity
with your impeccable wordplay.
righteous anger
beautifully written, papi
xo
with your impeccable wordplay.
righteous anger
beautifully written, papi
xo
26th Jun 2016 9:07pm
Sweet Shadoe, I'm humbled n honored... I thank you truly for your support always :)
26th Jun 2016 6:15pm
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28th Jun 2016 11:28am
Clever title and awesome wordplay ..truly enjoyed this potent piece...pen daps and finger snaps..Excellent Ink as Always Poetik
28th Jun 2016 12:50pm
Thank you my sweetheart, as usual you made me smile... Truly appreciate all the support you give always :)
1st Jul 2016 2:49pm
I'm a big fan of wordplay and I liked what you did here...the punchline knocked it out the park.
1st Jul 2016 2:54pm
Aaaawww thank you sweetie pie, truly n always grateful for your support. :)
Wow! What a witty and clever vent with a powerful punch! Poe, you do know how to stir my intellectual juices... ;)
Wonderful read luv!
Wonderful read luv!
3rd Jul 2016 00:34am
To stir your juices is an honor my dear
A very sweet yummy honor lol... Treasure you! Thanks tons :)
A very sweet yummy honor lol... Treasure you! Thanks tons :)
5th Jul 2016 9:21pm
Well alright... Very clever write and pulled off as only you know how to do... Nice play on words here...
6th Jul 2016 6:15pm
7th Jul 2016 1:40pm
Hey Poet.......this is a great vent of truth.......always luv your ink my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
7th Jul 2016 5:16pm
Anonymous
8th Jul 2016 00:26am
A worded wizard... so whimsically written ;-) dkruie
16th Jul 2016 1:52pm
Anonymous
12th Jul 2016 1:41am
PM!! You always have such a way to get those words playing so nicely together no matter the sandbox in which they sit...a talent I am unable to acquire...outstanding job my friend!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
12th Jul 2016 2:29am
Thank you sweet Taryn you placed a huge smile on my mug!! lol I am truly
grateful for your words n your support :)
grateful for your words n your support :)
16th Jul 2016 9:13am
In times like these, this piece hit a lot of sore nerves. I loved and related to it :)
16th Jul 2016 7:28pm
I'm flattered you did n yea I agree this time period we exist in will cause many a nerve to be rattled lol
