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Dust Storms
Whispers on wings
of rasp uttered remembrance
closes in with choke holds
everything needed said
my eyes mist
caught up in fog
a shroud blanketing valleys
where it said
each journey
buys another golden ticket
swaths of grey field align blue
painting compassion
come to my rescue
has been outcry
uttered cliff-side
watching stone crumble
& echo on
through barren valleys
I've not seen the dust settle yet
of rasp uttered remembrance
closes in with choke holds
everything needed said
my eyes mist
caught up in fog
a shroud blanketing valleys
where it said
each journey
buys another golden ticket
swaths of grey field align blue
painting compassion
come to my rescue
has been outcry
uttered cliff-side
watching stone crumble
& echo on
through barren valleys
I've not seen the dust settle yet
Published 2nd Jul 2016
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2nd Jul 2016 5:28am
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2016 7:59am
You know i loved it the moment you showed it to me, its got your signature style all over which is undeniable.
I'm so glad you're writing again :))
I'm so glad you're writing again :))
11th Nov 2016 12:58pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
2nd Jul 2016 8:33am
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2nd Jul 2016 10:10am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
4th Jul 2016 3:00am
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