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Take it in... take it in

For anandosen's raut caught challenge
 
Bows to a corset style gown
Four piece skirt, lined in black
With white strands of cotton
Dangling down
All around, at different lengths,
A bow residing in the center, black
With dimante' glued in the middle
And two 3 inch" white buttons line each side
Keeping it together, sinfully tragic
And the lines of lace across the front
This zipless piece breaks all boundaries
With black cotton stiched along the torso
And white for all the rest
But the back resides more beautiful than in the front
With cross straps in the center of straight straps
And shoulders short, of lace, with a harsh copper stud on each
Creating the modern feel
And my own designer touch
The manequin looks as if strangled beneath
My creation, a mere masterpiece
My boss will sure be loving me
I can surely see it now, with plush grey angel wings
And nude shade stillettos
A model tall, and busty, curves taking control
And breaking the boudaries, of stick figures
Moving like lego men, but I know the company wont go for it...
So I'll just take it in... take it in... take it in...
Along with my dreams, and my imaged result
Take it in... with my pride
Take it in... for the world
Take it in... no I can't take it in
I shall have to start from scratch *sigh*
Written by skinnyjean (Llamaliscious)
Published | Edited 14th Jan 2013
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