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an intimate revue...
band's playing too loud
can't you hear me...
and over the crowd
you say, "nearly...
although they may
have to play
even louder, my dear,
to block you out
completely..."
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Re. an intimate revue...
21st Jun 2016 1:53pm
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21st Jun 2016 3:32pm
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21st Jun 2016 2:17pm
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21st Jun 2016 3:33pm
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21st Jun 2016 2:23pm
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21st Jun 2016 3:35pm
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21st Jun 2016 2:58pm
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21st Jun 2016 3:39pm
what's it all about, Alfie...
no hang on, these cultural references
need updating...
no hang on, these cultural references
need updating...
Re: Re. an intimate revue...
23rd Jun 2016 5:25am
Then we need to move north america for our reference... though sadly, and unlike Alf, the donald has no charm about him.
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