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In or out?

 When I close my eyes

The world is still out there?

Or that's  just in my mind

That illusion and sense

Are pains still out there?

Am I feeling them now?

Can I find some rest here?

Or my answer is simply no

Pains are here in mind?

They just reside inside

Outside? Inside? Or both?

Tell me where is pain source
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