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my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
deep in the forested Red Woods
lush with ferns and mossy beds
little mushrooms sprout here and there
waterfalls cascade into azure pools
here the fairies play
my lovely one and I are there
swimming in the magical healing waters
balm to our spirits and souls
a sacred place
where no evil can dwell
she a Goddess adorned in nature's finest
sunflower skirt and poppy top
dark haired beauty captivates me
with blackberry flavor
upon tangerine lips
gentle as a breeze is her kiss
gazing at her with sunshine in my eyes
I see her pain and bid the fay creatures to tend her wounds
with a heady elixir from roots and tree bark
drinking the potion she sees a vision
of a far away place
knowing now she is on a great quest
the guardian's of this kingdom
have set her on the path to her freedom
her heart in chains
a mighty warrior has the key to her release
many beasts are on the road
seeking to devour my Goddess
her hero wields a magic sword
slaying all in her path
they are on a fated collision course
with one another
love has seen to this
my beautiful one now journeying
the forests and our kiss
forever on her mind and lips
opens her eyes as from a deep sleep
bids me farewell
a small tear gracing her cheek
I inhale her smelling of summertime
saying i'll see you in my dreams
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 16th Jun 2016
| Edited 18th Jun 2016
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Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
Anonymous
16th Jun 2016 3:03am
My Beautiful Brenda...I shall cherish this until my last breath...so many lines speak to me and my heart deeply...
"gazing at her with sunshine in my eyes
I see her pain and bid the fay creatures to tend her wounds
with a heady elixir from roots and tree bark
drinking the potion she sees a vision" <~~ may I have my Blackhaus please?..... ;)
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"many beasts are on the road
seeking to devour my Goddess
her hero wields a magic sword
slaying all in her path"
~ I am grateful to the guardians for who they have blessed me with...you of course being one of them...those are the ones who are my "family". It is those special chosen ones that will see me through my times of darkness in the love which smothers me...and I wouldn't have it any other way...
Intoxicated I am with these words of love and support and I'm sure he will be as well. Thank you from the very deepest depths of my heart...
I love you so much
xoxo Taryn
"gazing at her with sunshine in my eyes
I see her pain and bid the fay creatures to tend her wounds
with a heady elixir from roots and tree bark
drinking the potion she sees a vision" <~~ may I have my Blackhaus please?..... ;)
*
"many beasts are on the road
seeking to devour my Goddess
her hero wields a magic sword
slaying all in her path"
~ I am grateful to the guardians for who they have blessed me with...you of course being one of them...those are the ones who are my "family". It is those special chosen ones that will see me through my times of darkness in the love which smothers me...and I wouldn't have it any other way...
Intoxicated I am with these words of love and support and I'm sure he will be as well. Thank you from the very deepest depths of my heart...
I love you so much
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:19am
my beautiful one so inspired am I by your beauty, essence and journey..
I love you so much and am simply reflecting back at you like a mirror the loveliness I behold..
thank you sacred Goddess of the fairies for being in my life..
xoxo Brenda
p.s. bottoms up and cheers :)
I love you so much and am simply reflecting back at you like a mirror the loveliness I behold..
thank you sacred Goddess of the fairies for being in my life..
xoxo Brenda
p.s. bottoms up and cheers :)
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 5:36am
Magical. Brought memories back of spending time in a cool black oak forest on a warm summer day.
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:34pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 5:47am
too cute in her poppy top
& blackberry seduction.
your poem dances, Crim...
& blackberry seduction.
your poem dances, Crim...
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:35pm
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:36pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
Anonymous
16th Jun 2016 9:57am
I'd like a drink from that cup :) , sounds magical,
I had a fantastic mental journey just reading this.
Excellent verse with perfect visuals and dreamy meter
captivating, dear Brenda :) xx
I had a fantastic mental journey just reading this.
Excellent verse with perfect visuals and dreamy meter
captivating, dear Brenda :) xx
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:36pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 10:06am
Fantasy is always better than reality. It helps us cope with everyday pain.
True poetry ^^
True poetry ^^
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:37pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 1:11pm
My Dearest Brenda,
I believe you are at your best when walking in the light and sharing your warm light. I am sure that you have brought smiles and happiness to our dear one as only you are able.
Such a beautiful write... Greatly enjoyed. As always thank you for sharing that beauty that you see.
Love
Keith
I believe you are at your best when walking in the light and sharing your warm light. I am sure that you have brought smiles and happiness to our dear one as only you are able.
Such a beautiful write... Greatly enjoyed. As always thank you for sharing that beauty that you see.
Love
Keith
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:38pm
thank you graciously Keith bringing her smiles is contagious and does the same for me :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 1:35pm
We give most when we give of ourselves
in complete freedom, without expectation
of holding on. Lovely write, Crim.
in complete freedom, without expectation
of holding on. Lovely write, Crim.
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 3:39pm
thank you most kindly sage one for seeing this a special write for a very dear lady :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 5:19pm
Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
18th Jun 2016 8:50pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
16th Jun 2016 7:23pm
A fine fairy tale Crim, uplifting and delightful. It has heroism, a Goddess in distress but a happy ending. Quite a change from the darkness of your usual. May the journey continue, beautiful one!
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
18th Jun 2016 8:51pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
17th Jun 2016 5:25am
You amaze me, Mistress Crim. You go from writing about Ted Bundy to this is quite a feat. Not many writers can switch gears like that. You are an inspiration to us all.
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
18th Jun 2016 8:52pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
17th Jun 2016 5:50pm
This is incredible.
Love the magnificence you deliver.
Thank You, Crimsin
Love the magnificence you deliver.
Thank You, Crimsin
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
18th Jun 2016 8:52pm
Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
Anonymous
18th Jun 2016 1:51am
Beautiful write, Brenda.. simply beautiful.. love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. my beautiful Goddess of the fairies
18th Jun 2016 8:53pm