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Hell Hath no fury....
You think you have seen me naked... my skin exposed
My Heart on my Sleeve
My soul laying in the hot Dust for all to feed upon?
You think you know me inside out
My every thought and Dream laying there for you to snigger and belittle
You think you have me all figured out and I am yours
owning my thoughts and taking them as your own like a true obsession.
Think again.
I had a plan.
......I outsmarted you regardless .
Never underestimate a woman scorn .
Published 15th Jun 2016
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- Edited 15th Jun 2016 3:40am
15th Jun 2016 00:45am
scorned?
15th Jun 2016 4:08am
15th Jun 2016 6:58am
Some vent Bluesky..some vent.. am scared for the poor soul mentioned in this... echo John- re fury as well as penning it nicely!
25th Aug 2016 7:37pm
Strong emotion and powerful images. The first verse is particularly effective. Good writing. I agree with London-Poets though - surely it should be a woman scorned. A typo? Or, if you want to avoid the cliche and possibly give the ending a slight twist, 'a woman's scorn'? In terms of the narrative structure I would like to see a little more of the plan and outsmarting
2nd Jan 2018 3:39pm
Much enjoyed this read.
Not of course for the situational depiction,
but rather the descriptive wording used.
Particularly liked the way the last sentence is written,
"Never underestimate a woman scorn ."
for it leaves the reader to ponder and select
(did she mean "woman scorned" or "woman's scorn")
thus placing their own ending on the poem.
Even if it was not intentional, it added a thought provoking twist,
Nicely done.
Not of course for the situational depiction,
but rather the descriptive wording used.
Particularly liked the way the last sentence is written,
"Never underestimate a woman scorn ."
for it leaves the reader to ponder and select
(did she mean "woman scorned" or "woman's scorn")
thus placing their own ending on the poem.
Even if it was not intentional, it added a thought provoking twist,
Nicely done.
