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Loving you
was like fucking the void, a call
from a dead lover, orgasm in the
crumbling corner of my brain.
And yes,
I still miss your imaginary
weight on me.
Published 16th Jul 2011
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16th Jul 2011 6:51pm
and different, and I especially enjoy your use of the category to emphasize the metaphors. Great work, Dahlia.
17th Jul 2011 1:23am
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16th Jul 2011 8:05pm
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27th Jul 2011 4:27pm
this is unique to what i have read and written in this category.
I still miss your imaginary
weight on me.
says you know what you are talking about.
great write belladonna.
shine on!!
I still miss your imaginary
weight on me.
says you know what you are talking about.
great write belladonna.
shine on!!
28th Jul 2011 8:01am
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2011 9:32am
How clever...profoundly special...&...addictive.
I can't wait to read your next offering b...
Blue Skies to you!
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I can't wait to read your next offering b...
Blue Skies to you!
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23rd Oct 2011 1:37pm
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