deepundergroundpoetry.com
infra-red
you are a beautiful soul
smothered in darkness
a delicacy delicately
sauteed in esoteric musings
magnifying my 3rd eye's
voyeuristic tendencies
i seek you out
licking your pheromones
out of thickened air
following your heat signature
in zombie like fashion
with crimson irises
molesting your thoughts
...
you are the ebony garden
where my imagination grows
to potential thick and full
my vine harvested once again
ripe with God's nectar
rummaging through your foliage
with my heart heaving
in beastly hunger
ravenous
feed me in the night
my benign enchantress
with incoherent exhales
and broken wails
as i suck upon your oxygen
like your loving incubus
inoculating
indoctrinating
through blind ecstasy
tethered by ropes
of burning desires..
take me incre-mentally
and feel my longing for you
as i take the stand
inside your holy walls of judgement
to offer yet another testimony
imperfect...jagged...raw
spilling pieces of
an endless dream
inside the wondrous realm
that is you...
Published 4th Jun 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 19
reading list entries 2
comments 15
reads 1630
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
4th Jun 2016 4:20pm
Oh...this is intoxicating! ☺
4th Jun 2016 5:07pm
4th Jun 2016 6:26pm
*swallows hard*
I'll have what she's having... Damn!
You and your words, they.....they just.... the way you make them....you have this way of.... what I'm trying to say is...umm
...shit, I'm just gonna' go take a nap....
I'll have what she's having... Damn!
You and your words, they.....they just.... the way you make them....you have this way of.... what I'm trying to say is...umm
...shit, I'm just gonna' go take a nap....
4th Jun 2016 7:28pm
Your connection is amazing. I am indeed touched by your words you display in the fantastic manner that you have. Thank you.
4th Jun 2016 9:01pm
Agree with those who've already commented. This is a breathy, heady composition that is pregnant with desire. "licking your pheromones/ out of thickened air" being the line that I love best. Namaste.
4th Jun 2016 11:57pm
5th Jun 2016 3:25am
Oh my *fans self* This was full of steamy and dreamy heat ..Exquisite Artistry
Fav lines:
"take me incre-mentally
and feel my longing for you
as i take the stand
inside your holy walls of judgement
to offer yet another testimony
imperfect...jagged...raw
spilling pieces of
an endless dream " instantly makes me think of one of my fav Barkays song - unforgettable dream..dang I gotta go listen to it since its stuck in my head now lol enjoyed as always
Fav lines:
"take me incre-mentally
and feel my longing for you
as i take the stand
inside your holy walls of judgement
to offer yet another testimony
imperfect...jagged...raw
spilling pieces of
an endless dream " instantly makes me think of one of my fav Barkays song - unforgettable dream..dang I gotta go listen to it since its stuck in my head now lol enjoyed as always
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
5th Jun 2016 8:26am
<< post removed >>
5th Jun 2016 5:38pm
Like the low slow growl of the shifting stalk of a tiger who means business.
rawr
rawr
5th Jun 2016 8:20pm
Okay, you surpassed simple eroticism and ventured
into the whispers of Heavenly murmurs and sighs meant
only for you. Your mastery of the English language serves
you well indeed.
into the whispers of Heavenly murmurs and sighs meant
only for you. Your mastery of the English language serves
you well indeed.
7th Jun 2016 3:50am
Scintillating.
just.. . .just touching
all over .. and runes
are nowhere to be.
found.
Your depth and sight is
Kingly steep
It takes one"s airs away
just.. . .just touching
all over .. and runes
are nowhere to be.
found.
Your depth and sight is
Kingly steep
It takes one"s airs away
Anonymous
9th Jun 2016 3:19am
Naaj, you have such a way where the flow within the read is a smooth a silk and slides from the tongue like drool dripping along delicacies....
"with incoherent exhales
and broken wails
as i suck upon your oxygen
like your loving incubus
inoculating
indoctrinating
through blind ecstasy
tethered by ropes
of burning desires.."
~ mm mm mm...smh....perfection!
With love - Taryn xoxo
"with incoherent exhales
and broken wails
as i suck upon your oxygen
like your loving incubus
inoculating
indoctrinating
through blind ecstasy
tethered by ropes
of burning desires.."
~ mm mm mm...smh....perfection!
With love - Taryn xoxo
Anonymous
4th Aug 2016 4:22am
This is truly breathtaking.
Sensuality engulfs the heart, mind, and soul and carries it throughout this full poetic journey.
Intoxicating ink
Sensuality engulfs the heart, mind, and soul and carries it throughout this full poetic journey.
Intoxicating ink
9th Aug 2016 2:07pm
